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yeah, i think fuinjutsu is problably the biggest plothole in this novel, this shit is too strong for no reason, i mean it's not like Fujin is using enterilly novel seals, or a long lost scroll with hidden seals, he's just using atuff he learned in the village, but nobody else in the world uses? why no one uses it if they are so strong? it seems like fuinjutsu is only overpowred when Fujin is using it, like how he fleed Darui with some shitty floating explosive tags, how his personna cloak stops weak ninjutsu. I don't care if you think i'm hating on you, if you can't take criticism you shouldn't be writing stuff. Trying to comment on things i think doesn't make sense and might be considered in next works, and the author just comes and calls haters. Good mentality man, your novel is a perfect piece of art, never seen something so good before, Kishimoto should retcon Naruto and use your novel instead. This my last comment here, good luck on your life, be safe and healthy.

it's just Rasa i think.

No, they rebelled because they worked for the village as the police force everyday and died in the war for the village without ever having a chance to have one of them as Hokage. And were suspected, hated and isolated for an atack in the village, with Hiruzen, Danzo as elders, there would never be an Uchiha Hokage. And the sleeping agents wich i would guess at most 30 inside Kumo would only be able hold back a few months, if Kumo really wanted war.

this here is o e of the greatest flaws of this world building, if Kumo really wanted to atack, they would have done so after the uchiha genocide. The biggest and strongest clan in the entire village gone in a single night, the clan resposible for the police and internal security(the chaos and realocation of personal you would have to do to cover them here), there never was a better moment for another village to atack.

my friend, at this i think you should understand that Fujin is an egoist piece of shit, he's a vilain, growing a consience at this point would bizarre as fuck, this guy literally killed hundreds of people doing human experiments to develop his techinques.

Fuinjutsu is so OP in this AU man, the fuin battlefield and the infinite amount of seals he can put in a limited space like his cloak or his house is unreal.

tbh there might be a cannon way to deal with Orochimaru by stoping his reverse summoning, you would have to break his summon contract with a seal just like how Minato broke Obito's contract on the Nine tails. That's an assumption that you can break it with seals, but Minato is problably top 3 or 5 sealmasters ever shown in Naruto as well.

well, if we go into the novels we see Kakashi using Quartza wich is basically Lighning + Earth.

man, Kakashi is my favorite character in Naruto, i wish we could have seen more of him before now, but it's not a problem for me. thanks for the chapter

making Hiruzen and Danzo suffer is allways fun.