JustDK

really did* gain..... typo not suppose to be didn't.

I kinda disagree. I think it's unexpected, but in a way, it shows that Zabo really didn't gain something supernatural from his reincarnation. It's been mentioned countless time how he's a freak of nature with how quickly he works and makes games, this reveal kinda finally shows he got more out of his reincarnation then just memories.

You should just delete this chapter and not even mention anything about the Olympics. I find it hard to continue this story with how stupid the decision is. Like he's a businessman, he's a wwe fan, he should know that being famous is a brand onto itself and will immensely help his future WWE career. it's already 2008, summer Olympics is literally happening ASAP so it's not even a significant time investment in comparison to the fame it will bring and help his career. to decline it is absolutely ridiculous and kills any momentum and immersion this story had going on.

That's a brilliant suggestion. I would read. Or even yet.... Makes it an SI sequel. Kyle's next life. We need more Kyle.

Good thing it's not 2024.... he might have had to forfeit and apologize for brutalizing the other team so much, unsportsmanlike conduct lol.

This was really bad, not the breaking up part, but how rushed it felt. You literally spent like 5 or 6 chapters having her chase him, then one injury later and 1 chapter of separation and it's all over. Just not a fun way to read things, makes the entire romance subplot completely pointless feeling, and brings alot of doubt into the future on how the romance will be handled.

She's pregnant isn't she? home school to hide it.

This chapter seems to be a major derail from how the story was portrayed... Was loving it and especially the previous chapter showing her humanity and how she wanted to just make games.... then out of nowhere, this random plot point gets thrown in, and she's now a goddess on a power trip. what happened to just wanting to make games?

Probably rig a stunt to fail, making Kyle potentially injure himself. Time was the key component Lex mentioned a few chapters ago, probably wants to delay the movie. However Kyle will probably pull some real life Spiderman shiet and make the movie even better.

Does Kyle actually not know about Lex, or was Lex correct in his assumptions? If I had to guess, he probably doesn't know what he looks like so probably didn't truly know who it was.