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bruh, i cant understand anything. pls improve the translation quality of this. it couldve been average, but now its just trash. it literally feels like someone who barely understands english wrote this yet the opening page has a british flag on it. what kind of lie is this? another classic webnovel lie ofcourse.
bruh you literally have a knight. if the character is stupid, that means the author is either writing a stupid character, or is stupid themselves. i dont hink the mc is supposed to be stupid so that means the author is stupid. stupid author get better jesus. another good concept ruined by a bad writer.
my biggest problem with this is that it has info dump after info dump, fillers with only world building one after another. i dont mind having a novel that expands in its world design, but seriously, not even 50 chapters in, you havent even let the mc get in his mobile base, and youre focusing on world building already? this story should focus on the mc and his mobile base not on some other side characters family background and entire history as well as their ideals and revelations. not to mention there isnt even a proper frame work or general understanding in the world yet youre already sweating the small details. its so borimg and repetetive and im not even in the 50 chapter mark yet. priorities author, priorities.
this will definitely be the next big slice of life novel,... until webnovel butchers it like every other good novel they have, and then a hiatus will absolutely destroy whatever speck of potential this story has left. You know, in typical webnovel fashion. i just hope that i get bored by the time that happens so that i wont be hurt as much.
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING NOVEL. Not a new concept or idea, but well executed. The plot is well-planned and spaced out wonderfully so as to not feel too less or too much. Translation quality is bad, but i can stomach it. It somewhat becomes better at around 250 chapters. MOST IMPORTANTLY, the MC is not a virgin dweeb that refuses to fall in love for 5000+ chapters. Imagine that, from a chinese novel.
I dont think its a good way of writing to, straight up, just say hes a cold blooded killer. It will look pretentious and cringe. Either show it properly and not in a half assed way or give a flash back when he is like that. Its just so cringe when someone tells himself he is a 'cold blooded killer'...
im slightly disappointed, i just started reading it and was expecting a black market tech business type start, buy instead it starts with a going to different movie worlds thing. i mean, its not bad, but i wasnt expecting that and tbh was very close to just dropping it. i will update this eventually
.... the cover of this story does no justice. It is by no means some normie farming isekai. nonono it is far worse, much more evil, as dark as the darkness of the universe is. it is about an eldritch cthulhu being that is a farmer. read it, it is quite interesting. very creative and original. i love it.