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and this time the store manager/pharmacist is a woman

This time he's a man

It's not fair the author keeps focusing on the supporting characters while we are eager about the main leads, i mean only 2 chapters are allowed per day if we don't pay for privilaged charters and both the chapters are about Tang Jingyao and Meng Tian

oh my God what did this idiot do to her brother? he would only be begging this much had he sinned. 🤦

At first glance i liked the book and added it to my reading list but then the more i read it, i found multiple grammatical errors and some of the paragraphs don't even make sense AT ALL. And some of the things the female lead actor does or says are complete falacy like she knows she's a werewolf but denies it? i mean hatred is one thing but denial of existence is something else nd she changes schools and promises to avoid attention even using wigs but then she's asking for a party invite, talking back to a bully and even the school's bitches, dressing to impress, wanting to make friends with popular students, etcetra.... is a bit contradicting for me and i suggest the author to go back and make an edition.

it's amaizing i love the book and am too sad to depart with it but my comment is that, some of the translations had inconsistent gender confusing me if the character was male or female. and the next thing is the character design where the author portrayed the female lead fang yuan as other worldly, i mean is this a fantasy or a novel i wasn't sure like operating on a patient ( a heart surgery) at 18 years with no medical school learning but just from another person and traditional medicine seems far fetched and unrealistic. i felt like the author portrayed fang yuan based off of her wishes to become. designing skills, managing skills, food and traditional medicine is one thing but medical skills allowing her to just waltz in a hospital and just operate a patient with out any medical license is childs play.

do the five year olds cook??? 🙄🙄🙄🙄

plus i saw that " The hidden heiress is a secret big shot " awfully mimics your story i mean very similar especially the female lead character, you should take a look at it, it is still an updating book unlike yours and also it's number 1 on popular rankings

This book is amazing and i love love it but i gave the character design 3 stars because you made your female lead character very extraordinary but also unrealistic and far fetched.

the cover for your book looks a bit ominous and is really not inviting to read for some people