Kousik_Mahato

This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.

I really love this novel. I have tried to find a good cultivation vrmmorpg novel before and I have never actually come across one. The main character is perfect in my opinion. He is just the right amount of naive and I love it. For me a naive main can get annoying very quickly but not Yuan. He isn’t an idiot but there are times where he just doesn’t totally understand concepts that are obvious to others especially the NPCs in the game. Which for me adds a nice touch to his character that I am enjoying and one of the biggest things I love about this story. One thing that I can hardly wait for, at the time of this review, is when his sister will enter the game and be able to play with him. It will be very interesting to see how she will react to who he is in the game. The world right now seems like a normal cultivation world in the game. I gave five stars for it just because I don’t mind that kinda thing and I am sure this author will enhance it and make it much better as they have done for their other novel. Also, while the pacing might seem a little fast I quite enjoy the speed it is going at. There are many novels that I can’t enjoy because things just seem to drag on but not in this story and I truly enjoy not having to trudge through multiple chapters that are only there to be around to pad the word count. It isn’t like that in this story and it is another one of my favorite things about it. The writing quality is pretty self explanatory in that it is well done and I haven’t been jarred out of my resding by spelling mistakes or bad grammar. I never expected there to be any problems from this author so it wasn’t truly a surprise for it to also be given five stars. At this time it is a little bit of a wait and see on the update stability but I gave five stars for it in the true hope that the author will give us consistent updates to this wonderful story. In conclusion thanks foe an amazing story and I hope more people read it.

A really Good Novel You should definitely chech it out !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author here. This novel has been re-uploaded in this new link. If you like to see the reviews of the original link, check it on my profile. In any case. Due to the delay, I uploaded 5 new chapters from where I left it off and will try to upload a chapter a day(can't totally promise) for a few days. Thank you for your continued following and reading. 3yr

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This novel, not biased, have the potential to be one of the best novels on this app. I'm not even kidding, it has the potential to be at least in top 10, if not top 5. Okay, let start with what makes this good. First, the writing quality is peak. You will see little to none grammatical errors, or spelling errors, for that matter. So you don't have to bang your head in order for you to understand what the hell the writing means. The description is very good; it allows your brain to vividly imagine what's going on without you putting much effort to it. Story development? Honestly, I would argue it is one of the best aspects of this book. I won't spoil it for you but the foreshadowing is absolutely fire 🔥. There won't be a lot of info dumps at early chapters and the development is not fast nor slow, just perfect. There is also comedy and humour to lighten the tone so you won't get bored. Character design. The characters are almost life like and you won't see any characters acting bizarre like in your usual cultivation novel. There maybe some cringe stuff to them, but you will definitely relate to most of the characters and intimately understand them, specially the MC. The world background. To be frank, the novel is in its early stages, and if you are familiar with the author other works, then you can at least depend on him that much 😉. So my advice is to read it and see for yourself. Now there are some minor issues as well. But they are nothing problematic. However, one issue I'd like to push to the author is that, will this be a harem novel or not? for me personally, I'd like to be single FMC and most of the readers, from my experience, will also like to agree as well. The reason behind it is that, it is not a smut novel is shgs, this novel is fantasy/action/romance book. But it ultimately is about beast, and I think making it a harem will beat that purpose. On the other hand though, please do continue to write some lemon scenes. I think this much will appease the harem route readers. But yeah, this is it. P.S. if you like novels about dragons, you're in for a ride (⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠). P.S.(2) Author, this might be selfish of me but please increase the chapter release rate 🙏🏿 img

This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk. 2yr

This book is a light and enjoyable read! It blends elements of the harem, martial arts, and supernatural genres, but with a twist. The protagonist is not your typical hero but a character filled with human weaknesses. Despite having powerful magic, he continuously learns new skills like martial arts and qi cultivation.

it's really well written with the perfect balance of story and naughty things. I can really recommend this story for everyone who likes fantasy.

Just caught up with this came here from your other work because I enjoyed your writing style and heck i wasn't disappointed. I'll be in tune to see how this goes please see it through. Also I know Maya is a bit silly but please give her a second chance before things get too far, also Vincent needs to die in the worst possible way, he always manages to annoy me every chapter. All in all you are doing a great job on all characters so far they are all well fleshed out, great job on your stream reactions too they're always fresh. Anyways without me ranting too much just don't drop this, it might be getting low tractions now but I believe with more chapters many will come to appreciate this masterpiece.