lazy_gamer23

I hope you don't make sunny stronger than mc or it will seem like every hard work of him is waste

if you run out of ideas maybe try to make them react to battles of angels in lotm as extra view in break

it could be reverse

orion wife can be gwen or wanda or jean

i think its raw chapter are locked and pirated website only have 60 something chapters

try spiderverse

nice chapters. Can you tell your update rate ? or are going to drop this book after few chapters

can you tell raw name ?

i am not hating you or anything it just frustate me to read 2 paragraph about her presence and intention just consider this my suggestion

do you want to fill chapter so much? last paragraph lines were all about she standing there and inviting him but it took like 20 line to understand it. you also concentrate on presence too much like can't you just tell her energy aura is high ,why would you need so much line for it