Belyashio

After chapter 20, it became absolutely impossible to read. The dialogue is a bit stiff, perhaps due to the influence of the time, but it just gets more and more depressing. The same phrases are constantly repeated every 2-3 chapters: "It chills you to the bone, this is how you survive," and so on. These phrases are getting pretty boring; come up with something new. And most importantly, after chapter 20, all the chapters became jumbled; it's hard to tell which chapter is which, and it's impossible to follow the narrative.

This web novel fanfic has been fully translated for several years now, so why bother with reboots like this?,..................................

It's very difficult to read because of the constant use of full names in a single paragraph. Writing the character's full name three times is incredibly poor work. You could just write Kotone (Asaba, I don't know which is his first name and which is his last name) and Aki; it would be much more pleasing to the eye. I hope you can fix this, otherwise my eyes are bleeding, and I'm sure I'll soon become a mangekyo myself.

It's very difficult to read because of the constant use of full names in a single paragraph. Writing the character's full name three times is incredibly poor work. You could just write Kotone (Asaba, I don't know which is his first name and which is his last name) and Aki; it would be much more pleasing to the eye. I hope you can fix this, otherwise my eyes are bleeding, and I'm sure I'll soon become a mangekyo myself.

Jigoro Kuwajima (桑くわ島じま 慈じ悟ご郎ろう, Kuwajima Jigorō?) was the man who trained Zenitsu Agatsuma and Kaigaku. He was formerly the Rumble Hashira (鳴なり柱ばしら, Nari Bashira?)[1] in the Demon Slayer Corps. It's takes from Kimetsu no Yaiba Wiki, he is Rumble Hashira, not Sound. Hashira Sound is Tengen Uzui, who invented his own breathing style. Correct it please.

Obito, Rin, Kakashi, Gai, and other peers... Kakashi graduated from high school very quickly, and after his father's death, he began to care less about the lives of his comrades and interacted with few people. Because of this, he was kicked out of his previous teams, precisely because no one else wanted to be in his squad, and he was assigned to the genin Obito and Rin.

Well, it's true that we actually like the main character of this fanfic because he's grounded in reality, he's not in the clouds like Naruto, and any adult understands that Naruto is overly idealistic, letting go of his negative emotions and so on. I'm not against Naruto forgiving most people, but the author is right to disagree with Naruto forgiving Obito. Naruto is a good character for a children's story, but for adults he is really too naive. No war is fought out of hatred, all adults understand this, resources are important, even on Earth, if we take wars, they are always fought for some purpose, and not out of hatred. And God, I'm glad I'm not naive and stupid like Naruto. And I don't see anything wrong with being like Hiruzen; it's just ordinary life. Where can you not meet a manipulator? In life, many people step over others to achieve success—Zuckerberg's friend and their feud and lawsuits over Facebook are just examples. I enjoy reading about a hero who sets clear goals, and yes, his goal is strength and power, but at the same time, he genuinely strives to strengthen Konoha and ensure peace. He has his own will, and he follows it no matter what. His Will extends to the entire shinobi world, while Hiruzen's is limited to his clan and Konoha.

You're right, but even books and fanfictions should be subject to at least some basic logic. Even assuming the existence of beings capable of destroying worlds, they all start somewhere. My point is that a 9-year-old, even a very talented one, can't defeat an adult jonin under any circumstances. Kakashi couldn't do it at 13, as you can see from the Kanabi Bridge, where he also became a jonin. For a ninja, experience is more important than a thousand jutsu. In both cases, the Iwa jonin were defeated with Obito's help, but here it's a 2-on-1 battle, with only one jonin against a jonin-chunin combo. Adult shinoyuki have been through countless battles and missions, their experience is immense. No one would underestimate a child, especially a genius. They would fight normally, without underestimating their strength, since such cases are far from uncommon. That's why the trope of a nine-year-old defeating an experienced jonin really creeps me out. Johnny is a versatile master, skilled in several elements, and has vast experience. There are only a couple hundred jonin in the villages, compared to thousands of chunin and genin.

Honestly, I never really understand how Tsunade is the undisputed Hokage. She was absent from the village for many years and didn't appear on the battlefield of the Third Shinobi World War. In fact, if not for her position, she would have been labeled a missing-nin a thousand times over. You can also always raise the issue of her hemophobia and it is very easy to prove that what will happen in the event of an attack and she will succumb to panic, this is a very huge minus. And the last thing that could pull Rengoku out of the obvious is how anyone can trust a Hokage who can't even protect a child. Naruto is the son of Kushina, Tsunade's sister. Kushina lived with Mito and Tsunade in Konoha. Kushina died, leaving her son behind, but Tsunade didn't care at all; she didn't fight for him or even try to give him any of her inheritance. Fourth, everyone understands that Tsunade is Hiruzen's student and will subconsciously position her like Minato. It's far from certain that she will start changing and shuffling everything; this isn't an obvious fact, and the clans don't want everything to remain as it is; they'd be better off supporting the opposition. In the original, I agree that there was no choice but Tsunade and Jiraiya, because, admittedly, there were no other candidates in Konoha, but in the fanfic, there are the Uchiha, their military achievements are excellent, they suppress the jinchuriki and are able to protect the village, the Hyuga clan will support them, others most likely too, the council is not fools to believe that Danzo and Hiruzen are not connected, they will be against him. And now they have at least some connections with the Uchiha, they opened the police to other clans. In my opinion, Tsunade loses here on every count. She's inferior in strength, inferior in competence. Rengoku is the leader and was an elder, so he has fresh experience, while Tsunade spent ten years drinking and gambling. She's mentally shattered. She has no roots in Konoha other than her grandfather's dream, while Rengoku has his entire family in the village, so naturally he'll fight for her to the bitter end. And Tsunade might just grab Shizune when she's fed up and run away. In short, in my opinion, if there really were normal elections, Tsunade would lose miserably to the current Rengoku.

Am I correct in understanding that he, in fact, now, like Madara, has the ability to use the regular Sharingan of the 3rd volume, the Eternal Mangekyo and the Rinnegan, since these are successive evolutions.