YourMum99

AWAHT? WHAT DO THESE EYES MEAN??!

you know what I think? remember the mute girl from the first chapter before reincarnation? I think that's her. she too is reincarnated like Kyle. which would explain the strong support and bias from the first meet

work -> want with -> worth. i hate auto correct

I'm sorry to say this, and I don't work the be 'that' guy but... please stop using such long sentances. each of them are with a paragraph. Understandably there are commas, but it feels like spoken in one breath without giving time to process them.

please review this paragraph

look at the size of that sentance ffs

waifuwitharocketlauncher / kyle's girlfriend

perfect - by Ed Sheeran?

honestly. a bit of a boring chapter, but I guess you earned some slack

why do you write such long sentances. makes my brain cook half the time to comprehend this