angel_reyes_8978

I liked this x-men fanfiction. the writing was good, and the use of accents was unique. The progression of the story was good, but it felt like certain events were rushed and what could have been good character development was washed over. The cast of characters was wide and love and losses were felt, but something was missing that would move a person to loving and remembering a story. Would I recommend it to others to read? yes. Would I read it again? probably not.

amazing ending

It is an incredible story that follows a journey through history. I love how Mc interacts with humans throughout his travels. Most stories involving immortals show how they slowly lose touch with the world around them, even becoming detached, but you've written it were the Mc understands while he may no longer be human he was once and he understands their struggle. Was it a Marvel fanfiction? no, but it makes a great historical fiction tale

wait, if Alex conjured the members, wouldn't he know what they have on them? Also, since when did he have the power to "materialize" the infinity stones?

An incredible idea. I remember watching yugi yo as a kid and then Marvel cinematic universe as a teen. This story had great potential, but I imagine it was a huge burden imagining the fights, character interaction, and getting the moves of the different monsters right. Still love seeing what could have been.

well at least it's not THE worst option

It's an incredible story. I enjoy transmigration, action, and system stories, and this one marks all my boxes. Will I have read several stories where the Mc has clones, this is the only one where the clones actually feel like another individual and not just a decoy to draw away suspicion or do unsavory actions. The market system is nice , and you put short stories showing how the market is not just a system for the Mc but a community.

kind of hard to create something when your constantly on the move, always looking over your shoulder.

This is an incredible story concept. Traveling through different collapsing dc and marvel universes, interacting with different versions of heroes and villains, while investigating the reasons for each universe's collapse, is incredible. One universe you should consider adding is the watchmen universe. My only concern is how long they currently spent in this wasteland universe and how big you plan to make this omniversal band of misfits team.