Keyaruga_Tsuki

IMMMMMMMMM WAITING FOR ANOTHER ONE BUD.

writing a villain as the main character is a good idea.The only issue is you cant write? .The reason people love villains in the first place is cause their was a story behind them something that drove them and broke them turning them into what they are. They weren't just some power hungry idiot who has no reason to do things.The villains people like are the ones with an emotional trauma and character.You have written a character with none of that and he's a hypocrite lol.Like how did you expect anyone to like a hypocrite.You took the short cut with the same old boring usually always leads to trash trope, "I want to be strong". Without even providing the smallest hint of story behind that.How do u say u want to write a broken character and don't even begin to provide reasons for why he is broken.You telling me he was born like that?? Might as well just say his brain wasn't fully developed or something but of course how would u know anything about villains? all u wanted to do was right the edgy bs.This is a worse version of Horizon though that Mc is 100x worse at least they got a story behind them, A goal, A motive, A Reason not just "I waNnA BE StRONg"

u respond to every review lol

I hope she pays for the damages.

STEAL IT. MAKE THE BOX JOIN AKATSUKI AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

thank u for the chapter 😔

mha ff just saying.