Narris027

Bot?

Bad writing and the plot is pretty shit as well.

What’s the point of doing this. You are basically saying option 3 is the only option.

What a shit decision. Number 1 wood release is way better then lava release. Number 2 this goes against the title of your story of “taking it easy” Number 3 Naruto has no link to lava release, he at least has a link to wood release since the uzumaki and senju clans are linked

Good writing and intresting premise, was a fun read. I recommend.

It was good for a few chapters then got boring. The grammar is ok it’s readable but not amazing. The writing style is a bit long winded and it drags out to much. And the fight scenes could be better explained. But overall it’s a decent read for a bit.

It’s an ok idea but the way it was written feels like it was AI

Its good to have a cyberpunk fic after all the other ones were abondoned. It’s well written for the most part and intresting. I agree with the other review the dialogue is confusing. You don’t write dialogue like that.

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