SlumberSeal

This novel is the literal definition of "Gold in a Miner's hand". The idea and planning are great. No one has ever thought of doing a fanfiction on Hebi Sasuke but unfortunately, the author of this fanfic is a rookie and can't bring out the true potential of this book. 5 stars either way. Get good author

Not disappointing ending but the entire second half of the novel should be scraped. Spoilers. This is a novel that will follow the original story. You know basic stuff like fighting Madara and Kaguya thing. Naruto's Shinobi world story will end around chapter 250 and after which enters the one piece world. Mc will enter the pirate world with "his crew" consisting of Sasuke, Deidara, Tobirama and Kisame etc. He wanted to conquer and plant his divine tree in pirate world. It gets really boring after that. I dropped it many times along the way. The author became bored and then rushed the story and completed everything in about 440+ chapters. (He admitted himself) I just want the translator to either scrap the second half of the story or write the one piece saga better. Everything felt a bit rushed.

He should activate it right now . EMS is too good of an upgrade to halt.

Im so glad someone added black pearl in a one piece fanfic.

the author prob have no idea how to continue the story further without the boys.

thanks

author can you tell me how to make the words bold while writting?