Author (but imagine it was said like the daleks say "doctooooooor") Tabletop RPGs are close to my heart, so if you drop some of that talk in my comment I'll be sure to respond!
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See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
Thank you for the feedback, very valuable. I added in three new chapters at the start(a short arc I had cut prior) and revamped some of the other ones. Still work to do but I'll be hard at it
Tear, Tear and Tear are the name of the mc, the liquid that flows down his cheek and what he will do to his enemies(tear apart). Always interesting to see the new ways our MC's get in to their worlds. A big thumbs up for more chapters to come.
Hope his grandpa never put bad books in to his library. He needs to believe like yugi.
Man must have had some trouble in school when the assistant teacher read their name off the paper. Tear as in cry? Tear as in tear apart? Tear like the letter T and R? Tear like tea the drink and rrrrr like a pirate?
Answering my own review challenge from chapter 12: My most touching events have to be in chapters 11 and 12, the mood hits me everytime. Favourite characters I'll keep a secret so you won't read too much in to it ;)