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The "Circle of Fate" was an unexpectedly disappointing experience, especially after the brilliance we saw in "The Mysterious Lord." I had hoped that the author would carry the same quality and attention to detail into this novel, but unfortunately, it fell far short of expectations. The novel suffers from a weak plot filled with agendas and romance that is both disgusting and uncomfortable. The characters were one of the biggest letdowns. The novel lacked strong or developed characters, and even Lumian, who was supposed to be the central figure, was weak in terms of both motivation and execution. His revenge, which could have been a strong turning point, came across as shallow and dull, leaving no lasting impact. I felt no connection or suspense. The author truly let me down, as he failed to deliver even a fraction of the complexity and mystery that made "The Mysterious Lord" such an exceptional work. What "Circle of Fate" offered was simply bland adventures and monotonous events that felt hastily written without planning or creativity. This novel simply did not live up to the expectations I had built after the first one.

The world of the novel is a group of families who are sadistic and obsessed with power and position, and also in this world it is normal for anyone to be killed there and no one asks about you or your status. They only care about your strength as a person or the strength of your family. Other than this, you are like cattle to me

If you like this disgusting thing you are mentally ill🤢🤢🤢

Writer, if you add any of these agendas, I will leave your stories

A novel that can only be described as excellent because of the beautiful world building, interesting characters, and the development of a very good main character. Continue writing. I support you.^_^

A novel that can only be described as excellent because of the beautiful world building, interesting characters, and the development of a very good main character. Continue writing. I support you.^_^

In my opinion, Felix's ability is useless and does not help his story in any way

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Can you write a special story in Bleach