RitzBlitz

My bad, didn’t put this into spoilers. I can’t do it now. If author/mods can do so, much appreciated.

Review for 115 chapters: MC is now a proper late stage cultivator(Qi 7). He has also killed a grade 2 snake demon (roughly equal to Foundation Establishment lvl) back when he was at Qi 6. Although his grade 2 sword helped, and the terrain restricted the demon, it’s still quite the accomplishment. At least now he is more or less unbeatable within the Qi Cultivation stage. Also, he has moved to the main cultivation city under the sect (quite literally under it, it is at the foot of the mountain where the sect is at the peak, hidden in the clouds). He has settled down with his friends and subordinates. Costs are higher and the selling price of talismans is much lower. However, has acquired the skill for making the Amulet Talisman (Qi 7, basic talismans book). That has a better sale price, although still not quite as ridiculous as back in the village. Positives : The city is a Grade 1 cultivation land, perfect for Qi Cultivation. Also the large population means that there’s no beasts around. Also, he can fly under the radar even more since there’s like over 100,000 people there. Also there’s a bunch of books/techniques regarding the cultivation world that can be bought easily.

Is this the end of the novel? Or is the translation incomplete ?

Review for the first 64 chapters: It’s alright. There’s very little of the typical cultivation tropes. No face slapping, nobody is out to get the MC straight away. He transmigrated into the body of a 40-year old early Qi cultivation man. He has a system, however there are no missions or exchanges with it. It just tells him about his status, and every time he successfully uses a skill/spell, it increases the experience by one. Same for cultivation realms. So far he’s reached the middle of 5th Qi cultivation. No greatness, just a poor guy trying to survive in the cultivation world. Hopefully the realm upgrades get a little faster, his combat capabilities are already equal to 7th to 8th Qi cultivation. That’s thanks to his grinding skills over several months.

I was supportive towards the author at the start, however the author started to change the chapters just to extend the story and converted existing open chapters into locked chapters. The quality of English is mediocre, this is just another story about an overpowered MC that’s climbing up the ranks beyond what anyone can do, you can find a hundred stories like this on MTL websites. The quality of translation will also be the same. There’s basically very little originality in this story, and despite repeated reminders the quality of the writing hasn’t improved. You can see the chapter titles and tell how much effort has gone into this. It’s just somebody trying to use their spare time to earn some money. That’s all this work amounts to.

Did you change the chapter?

Be a little more careful when using Grammarly. Just check one sentence at a time. Also, I can’t scroll down from chapter 26 to chapter 27. Some problems with webnovel.

It should be “the beggar’s mocking words”.

Nice, you used my suggestion. This chapter has almost no problems and is easy to read. I suggest re-doing the previous chapters using Grammarly/Quillbot or something else. That way more people will read the starting chapters.

No ideas for the story, just a recommendation to use Grammarly or another English language checking app while writing. It’s a little difficult to understand.