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Honestly, author it feels like the story is dragging, it suddenly became even slower than a slice of life story and not to mention the sudden scene cut for the cliff hangers. at this point it's just annoying and not exciting to look forward to too. By the way thanks for the chapter.
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It was good, honestly very good but it shit after 10 chapters. But except for the initial chapters the whole thing turned into a mess especially in the new world. And I am 99% sure that it was made with AI, but there is a 1% chance that the author is an English literature student or a pro whose writing skills are mind-blowing . Because half of the chapters are usually filled with just nonsense description, like explaining same thing over and over again which basically happens with AI writing, and I think most people opened this Fanfic was due to the strong warning in Bold letters, but it was a huge mistake. There are more novels than you could think that have the R 18 tag and are more violent and nerfed than this, it can't even be compared to an actual R 18. this whole fanfic completely lacks feeling, despite the MC being overpowered, and being a god of wisdom he is the dumbest in the whole story, and literally his crown which should make him a competent king instead made him a competent clown. Events are forced to happen, Relationships are forced to happen, and despite the NPC being the literal copy of the anime version they are weak, Gojo wasn't even able to kill a bug without going all out. there are so many complaints I Would like to write as someone who read it till the recent chapter in hope of getting something interesting and entertaining but it was just a waste of time.
sorry' but i couldn't bear to read it past the five chapters, the MC has no emotions. he is just like some machines rambling and rambling at least a few dialogues would make it more interesting. And for goddamn sake, when you are dealing with a child just a year old they are not so fluent in speech and i am talking about rias, and you are already preparing to solo Trihexa so you could maybe groom rias and other characters from early age. you just ignored everything, it's like his family doesn't even care if he lives or dies and you know Sirzechs would have already noticed his strength spike because he is a war veteran himself. so much doesn't make sense and the whole chapter feels like some children's book just speed running everything. It's my personal opinion, if someone likes it then read it's your choice.