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Captain_Deadpool_22086 months ago
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gpt went CRAZY here
The final touch to his appearance was the array of ornate brooches and pins that adorned his coat, each embedded with small, gleaming gemstones. The most prominent brooch, with a large dark red gem, sat at his collar, serving as both a decorative piece and a potential magical artifact. His trousers, made of rich, dark fabric, were tailored to fit snugly and tucked neatly into polished black leather boots that reached just below his knees. The entire ensemble exuded an air of sophistication and authority, befitting a man of his standing.
The Villain Professor's Second Chance
Fantastique · Arkalphaze
Captain_Deadpool_22086 months ago
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yeah okay this ain't it, do research before you write about real life stuff I'm out
Bundy sighs, and I can almost feel the weight of his guilt pressing down on me. "I know I can never undo the things I've done," he says. "But I'm not that person anymore. I've been given a chance to redeem myself, and I won't waste it."
I Can Hear a Serial Killer's Voice in My Head
Fantastique · TK_Selwyn
Captain_Deadpool_22086 months ago
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You could've at least researched Ted Bundy to make this more realistic? Or made up a SK? This feels clunky
But Bundy is insistent. "It's not my choice, or yours," he says. "I have to stay with you until something is resolved. Until the crimes are solved and justice is served."
I Can Hear a Serial Killer's Voice in My Head
Fantastique · TK_Selwyn
Captain_Deadpool_22088 months ago
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strong start
RAGNAROK (AKA) THE CELESTIAL WAR
The Atrocious Werewolf Prince
Fantastique · The_Novel_Man
Captain_Deadpool_22088 months ago
Répondu à The_Novel_Man
I'll check it out good sir, how about you give my buddy Deadman here a read too?
Ch 67 Privileges & Responsibilities
Rise Of The Outcasts
Fantastique · deadmandreaming
Captain_Deadpool_22088 months ago
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Never knew you could write this well pal!
Ch 67 Privileges & Responsibilities
Rise Of The Outcasts
Fantastique · deadmandreaming
Captain_Deadpool_22088 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ch 1 Prologue - Waking
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urbain · slowestcook
Captain_Deadpool_22088 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ch 1 Prologue - Waking
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urbain · slowestcook
Captain_Deadpool_22088 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ch 1 Prologue - Waking
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urbain · slowestcook
Captain_Deadpool_22089 months ago
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Clean, funny writing and a VERY interesting and original plot (not for the faint of heart), this book is quite...delicious. I really enjoy it, and I'm sure you will too!
Hell's Kitchen
Fantastique · deadmandreaming