Project_Paladin
Hi, I'm kind of starting out on making fan-fics so read them and give me some suggestions please. “Remember! Reality's an illusion, the universe is a hologram, buy gold! Byeeee!”
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Project_Paladin4 days agoCommentéThis is good stuff, don't let it end, don't cut me off
- Project_Paladin5 days agoCommenté
I love this and I have a suggestion, could you make his weapon be the chains of Hades? He can take some of Hella's swords, fuze them wuth Uru and imbue the eternal flame into them along with some other runes, it would be really cool
- Project_Paladin5 days agoCommenté
Please continue,
- Project_Paladin5 days agoRépondu à Samuel812753
Not a bad Idea, this was my backup
- Project_Paladin5 days agoCommenté
- Project_Paladin8 days agoRépondu à Project_Paladin
With certain margins so that flight could technically be possible
- Project_Paladin8 days agoRépondu à saed_saeed
He can take away the effect of gravity
- Project_Paladin8 days agoPosté
This is a really good story, we have a good balance between plot and action, the characters have meaningful interactions and the idea behind this is just great, on top of that the system is only there to give power through the struggles and growth of the Mc not to give missions or control him.
- Project_Paladin9 days agoCommenté
Good
