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It’s too dramatic

The translation is really bad. You will be confused most of the time.

Really cringed at this paragraph

I never saw a crippling wish as this one

The MC have a character of a child who threw of tantrums whenever things doesn’t go his way and he keep acting like he is all knowing and he knows better than everyone else. It’s not very applicable character.[img=faceslap]

He was reincarnated

He’s a drama queen

Just delete this chapter and rewrite it. I don’t see how this plot twist is gonna get the story any better

It’s a bit annoying since the MC act like an anime character

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