Asa_Trey

coz it's dead

3 occupations and no explanation of what any of them are, just random snippets as if I'm supposed to know what six organs even mean in this situation

I'm confused so you have a fish at home that cooks for you and you're out here fishing for another fish

how big is this thing coz depending on the size, and how much fish is inside, I'm still wondering how you're carrying this shit home. You're technically weak and malnourished. If you said wooden bucket instead of barrel, that would be ok, coz bucket is literally just bucket, barrel is big barrel, but of course you don't bother with the actual details

you caught shrimp with a fishing line?

yea I'm done it was a bit more interesting in the manhwa, this is just shite

i get mortals doing that but it's a bloody spirit stone, I wanted simplicity not brain-dead, bro they have spirit energy, biting them doesn't test authenticity

an actual prodigal with a heart of gold, that's an actual personality for once, great start, and it's still simple straight to the point so far, no complicated backstories and whatnot

it's vr tech not simulation

I only have one problem, you've been talking about becoming a martial artist the last two or three chapters but you never actually explaines how, all you talk about is just stuff. Wouldn't it make more sense to actually start learning actual fighting techniques after you become one. 100% of the people you're probably gonna end up fighting are all gonna be martial artists, shouldn't that be your main goal, get on same realm first then compete in techniques. It's like picking up any form of martial arts in the real world with no bodily foundation, you need a certain level of strength In fantasy immortal cultivation it's like a qi cultivator mastering foundation establishment spells, meeting an actual foundation cultivator ans getting slapped into non existence.