DraconianofEND

heretic

the longer chapters will be amazing

hope the next chapter is longer, buy as per usual great writing!

An amazing start to a great story. I wonder if you already planned out a mother for Yamato?

Amazing writing, and a good level of conversational detail, although longer, more in depth conversions between characters would improve the quality. All in all you're an amazing writer. Keep up the good work:)