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  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin25 days ago
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    Ok everyone kept saying this is a remake of MTWBV and this one will fix all the mistakes in it. After reading it, it does seem to go that way and many comments mention that this one probably wont take the route where his mother becomes a part of his harem which is fair. But I would like to remind the author that MTWBV had a lot more serious issues that need to be fixed. For example the mc seems to keep everybody alive after he became strong just because they became insignificant. Like the heavenly father, the inquisition stirred up so much bs and it was a force directly under the heavenly father, why did the mc keep that old hag alive after everything? The whole elder god thing was so messy and dirty, those guys enslaved a whole planet's native population and kept creating all sorts of troubles, to be precise any one of the elder gods could have wiped out vlad and the whole vampire population, but they never bothered to attack? Just sending a bunch of poisons and spying tools all the time? Either dont have such op villains involved or dont make them dumb bystanders. There were so many evil celtic gods who were kept alive for so long, yama and merlin from the hindu pantheon hell too, nothing happened to them? well the celtic pantheon got wiped out after 1000 chapters but yama and merlin were spared for what? The heavenly father should have been killed as well, the guy is practically useless, he had a major divinity in creation but doesnt use it and cant control people under him for causing trouble unnecessarily. This role seems to have been taken over by the 'heroes' faction in this series so I hope the mc will eventually wipe out each and everybody remotely related to this whole event. Also the mc was running around at 200-300 kmph around while he first tested his strength, later on his strength doubled and his 3 wives were even stronger than him, so why did they take a car to rescue roxanne? They could fly above the clouds and created sonic booms at most. Also please get a maid squad those were one of the good things, even if you dont add them to the harem for 1000 or so chapters. The mc adding the maid's peculiar skills with his own was a really nice touch before he became a dragon. A maid with space and time skills and shadow skills is a must. Anyway its upto the author how he wants to proceed but I really hope the author wont let the bad guys just walk away after causing trouble, i dont care if it makes the op mc look vindictive or petty, its best to cleanup all trash. Even if the heavenly father has different beliefs or he is a pacifist, the inquisition is still under his command and he could have done something. Even if you do decide not to kill him, I hope you wont let the mc save them when some other forces try to destroy them.

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origina month ago
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    Ok it is somewhat like those cultivation novels where mc cultivates in secret with the help of a system and becomes too OP. Yes the mc is a coward like all the other kind of secretly cultivating mc's who are scared to go out because you may get killed outside. On top of that mc is also scared to kill anybody whether it be humans, demons, beasts etc. This novel in particular is something like 'Cultivating in secret beside the demoness'. Yes while I do understand that many who dislike this genre I personally like it very much. What I do not like about this particular novel is a few things. In the above mentioned novel the mc was bound to stay in the sect due to the threats from the demoness/sect master who was way stronger than the mc beyond his imagination. Like he could teleport to the opposite corner of the world and the demoness would still find him in a flash. That woman is somewhat like an immortal living in a mortal realm but she forces mc to push beyond his limits and grow stronger to do chores for him. So the mc had no choice but to do her chores while getting in all sorts of troubles and grow stronger so he can do the required tasks such as infilterate an enemy force full of people who are stronger than the mc. Yet in this novel the mc ends up as a servant in an OP sect and there isnt much pressure, nobody knows his true strength, everybody is sure that he has no talent, but the mc somehow ends up making breakthroughs after breakthroughs, sometimes to save others or save himself. When I say making breakthroughs after breakthroughs, I dont mean his actual cultivation but his cultivation on the surface, why is he even growing strong? At the beginning of the series mc only cared about his own survival and somehow once again he gets entangled with numerous people because of his righteous kind nature and saves random people or just keeps getting stronger while saying nonsense like 'I got lucky' or 'I used pills and forcefully broke through'. Is there really a need for all that? If someone attacks the place where he lives he can just kill them in secret with his OP strength and pretend he doesnt know about it. Or the 100 other ways. You know if you work in a medicine garden as a servant and some OP villain dies there, people are going to question the master of the valley or the desciples there or the guardians. A servant working in the garden is the last one who would be questioned about it. If all fails you can just run away from the sect or leave the sect and join another one, the world is big, nobody is gonna chase after a servant who works in the medicine garden. I mean Han jue's case was different, when he got stronger than the sect master of the jade pure sect, he decided to expose his strength to the higher ups to live a comfy life as a legendary figure. But the mc in this novel is already the strongest in the sect, yet instead of taking over the sect he keeps pretending to be a nobody while raising his strength with the excuse of using pills and luck. Thats just gonna bring you more responsibilities you know. On top of all that the mc wants to end up in the heavenly court, idk why everytime I see those 2 words I wanna throw up, the whole heirarchy of the heavenly court is so f'ing lame and boring. I have already dropped a few novels like 'My big brother is too steady' because of the heavenly court, whats this fetish chinese people have with the heavenly court. There are so many other better forces out there why is it always the heavenly court, the whole divine investiture and jade palace nonsense is so ugghh... I am gonna drop this shitty story after 300+ chapters because I know soon the mc will end up in the heavenly court. Also the mc is kind of a masochist. He gets forced into submission by women weaker than him because he is too cowardly to say no or run away. With his strength he could just slap the bitches to death or just run away from this stupid sect. You know you are gonna have to leave the sect when you join the heavenly court right? You could join some unnamed sect in a remote corner of the world where nobody will bother to look for you. You could go on a mountain and grow herbs there to grow your strength, but the mc is making promises to marry some of the women and getting bullied into joining the reverse harem of some women because he wants to keep a low profile. Even if you wanna keep a low profile you could just say no you know. Whats the worst that could happen? She will try to use force? She will turn public opinion against you? She will frame you as a molester? Then what? You are the strongest, kill them all or run away, atleast that way you will know that the bitch did not deserve your kindness and mercy. If she is verbally abusing and bullying you, thats one thing, many low-key mc tolerate it and get revenge when they have a chance, but these women are pinning him down and getting on top of him forcefully and mc just looks at them in a daze like a virgin who doesnt know what is going on. Sorry time to drop this shit.

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
    Répondu à SiI3nt

    woah chill old man

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
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    1 of my 4 favourite novels I have ever read. Like every other novel there have been times when I was annoyed at certain things and loved the way certain things were done by the author. Most of the time it was pretty great. I have also read primordial vampire system 154 chapters that are released so far. I personally believe that series should have been completed before supreme harem god system but I suppose its too late for that. Well the author is taking pretty much everything in a good direction with this one right now and unlike most people I can understand why its not time for certain things like giving aeliana's memories to her. I think it should be done accidently like a slip of tongue or something and then aeliana forces nux to tell her everything but the author might take a different route altogether. I have 2 things I need to complain about though. Firstly there should be a way to repair yrniel without azriel holding on to it so dearly. Dude kinda deserves better, I get why most people hate his arrogant nature but if you think from his pov he wants nothing to do with anybody but aeliana and because of her he saved nux and his gang from the prying eyes of the supreme world twice already. If they were discovered the supreme worlds would keep bothering them all the time and azriel saved them and never got thanked for it, so when Amaya starts her interrogation mode on a random stranger like azriel, remember the first time the progenitors appeared? 50 divines tried to question them and made to kneel in response while many getting exploded into blood mist. Normally nobody is allowed to raise their voices or question the progenitors. Ofcourse you dont have to kneel down, you can treat them like air but dont expect to get chatty with them, they dont have good tempers and frankly they dont even need to. You might have unlimited talent and potential but without strength, talent and potential is just that, Now nux and his wives might be priveledged in front of caesar and faustina because they have developed personal relationships, lets say they have a tiny bit of priveledge in front of aeliana as well because vyriana is good friends with aeliana and now part of nux's family, so she wont be harsh to them. But does azriel owe them anything? If anything he helped them against all supreme worlds without telling them, now it might not sound like a big deal but you should realize that the supreme worlds dont need to do anything. They can just declare a bounty or ask a bunch of low, middle and high level worlds to bully yrniel to draw nux and his gang out. azriel might be able to keep you safe on the planet, but will you stay on the planet forever? you dont need to go out to devour worlds to advance anymore? azriel saved them from that and in return amaya starts interrogating him and demanding answers, him here refers to someone even the progenitors treat with respect. Is he arrogant? Maybe. I would call it carefree because he doesnt wants to establish relationships with anyone, he doesnt wants to bully anyone, he doesnt wants to chitchat with anyone, and a nobody comes out of nowhere and starts demanding answers from him, why does he need to tolerate that? On top of that nux is a hypocrite. That serpent girl Nyssara, vyriana trash talks to her, its all good, she trash talks to nyssara, not cool, she should die. nux and his gang killed about 9000 divines, all good, they killed the immortal lane for rampaging around, not cool. I mean its a war so do whatever you want its fine, but later on dont claim that you are on a higher moral ground and some righteous being. Nux shows the same hypocrisy when azriel ignored amaya and nux said that azriel is being rude to his wife so azriel should get punched or something. bruh what the hell? If you dont like someone dont talk to them, why the typical arrogant young master privledged behaviour. Well anyway the second complaint is to bring ambrosia and eishleth to the harem, ambrosia might take a while because her husband is cool but eishleth had a falling out with her husband didnt she? Is the author planning on making nux reach primordial realm and then help all the divines like eishleth and ambrosia join the harem after that to help them achieve longer life when they are about to die the same way amaya did? This time it will be melia and aisha? Also get lilith more involved in the story come on. Additionally I have always been curious about this, so far the only demons explained in detail are the shadow demon, devouring mist demon, succubus, incubus, What about the other 24 kinds of demons? The one eyed demon has been mentioned many times but never explained what their powers are. And the fox kin are from other planets does that mean there are no fox kin beastclan on the beast continent of yrniel? or did they mix them? do all foxkin have space time abilities? Why isnt nux going after the mother daughter duo? fox kin have space time abilities, catkin have invisibility and are assassins, lion kin have berserker abilities as mentioned in primordial vampire god system, what about the others? are there elephant kin? are bullkin called minotaurs? There would be quite a lot of interesting content if author can stop with the useless "Worship my wives dramatic interactions of nux gang." so many new potential wives and bloodlines and powers for nux. It should give you enough content for about 1000 more chapters. Also the elf mother daughter duo needs to be added right? supreme world of chaos had 12 progenitors so lets assume the other 4 supreme worlds will also have 12+12+12+12 progenitors, so nux still needs 47 wives right? well if you think of the end scenario where he is watching from behind while his wives and azriel fight? he could revive his father too so lets make it 46 wives. Well if the author likes any of my silly ideas thats cool but please consider the 5 new potential wives addition as urgent. Eishleth, foxkin mother daughter duo and elf mother daughter duo are ripe and ready to join the gang.

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
    Répondu à SiI3nt

    have you read primordial vampire system? the 154 chapters that are released so far

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
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    The story development is going great, the world background is top notch with all kinds of different races, villains, politics, even gods who are basically useless and their plot seems very sus. why do i say sus let me clarify it so the author can see the huge flaw in his story. so there are 14 holy gods and 8 demon gods. damon who is the 14th has become a fallen angel. since he became a fallen angel it would be correct to say that the other 13+8 are also angels and demon dukes or greater demons or something. not actually gods. the one who is god should be the one above them all. so we have 14 angels and 8 demon generals/dukes or whatever under this 1 god. alright this is a slight error but nothing to bad, if he wants to call these 22 guys gods then so be it. so this guy on top forbids the other 22 from interfering in the affairs of the world. basically asking them to be bystanders no matter what happens. but then an evil guy pops out and becomes the representative of the demons. alright so far its all good. but then the 13 angels need to defeat him by sending someone representing them. if that was the case that would be all well and good. but remember this, the 8 demons are the same as the 13 angels, just their opposites. so the 8 demons bless the mc and only 1 of the angels bless their representative and he already becomes stronger than the mc with just the power of 1 of them? well there is your first flaw. either the gods are unbalanced like really really unbalanced where 8 of them together cant even match the power of the weakest of the 13, or they arent providing their blessings completely which makes no sense since they are about to die if they lose this time. alright so the mc has to kill the protagonist now who is the god's chosen and is stronger than him, he kills 1 and the gods choose another one? well how? shouldnt the terms of the game be equal? why are the demons only allowed to choose 1 weak guy and the gods can come up with 13 stronger representatives 1 by 1? its no wonder the demons have always lost right? The terms of this game are totally lame and unfair to the demons. And the big guy sitting up there should not be biased but he allows it to happen anyway. Moreover all 8 demon gods did not bless the mc at once, they do it 1 by 1 only when he needs it? why? And one of them provided him with a crest to make demons submit but he never uses it and gets attacked left and right by every evil being even in the demon realm. these blessing as you can see are pretty much useless. If 13 weak guys were against 1 strong guy, that would make sense. But here its 13 strong guys trying to kill 1 weak mc. there have only been 2 representatives so far and the mc powered up a lot between the 1st and 2nd guy and the 2nd guy was still much stronger than the mc and they justified it by saying that the 2nd guy is the representative of the strongest of the 13 gods, lets see what excuse will there be for the 3rd guy being even stronger since the god he will represent will not be stronger than the god of truth. That is another major flaw in the story. Now this is all the author's problem and it will be interesting to see how he fixes these things. What I am more concerned about is the level of depravity the mc can fall to. He sneaks into the blonde's base and spends days just messing around with woman, at this point the mc is just hellbent on proving to the world that he is not a hero but a villain, well a good villain doesnt care about such things, thats the job of the heroes to prove their nature to the rest of the crowd. It was fine until the mc had a sadistic personality and I just told myself that the author has some anger issues in real life and relieves them by writing this stuff about inflicting pain on everyone and raping women or ntr's every dude. Once he even raped an evil woman, turned her into a slave and then killed her which might seem like a waste but the author managed to get a thumbsup from me for doing the obvious thing for once. But in recent chapters I came to realize that the author keeps getting excited every 100 chapters about reaching 900 chapters or so but there is no character development for the mc yet. he is still as careless as ever and anyone can get past his senses and sneak up to him to listen on his conversations. He can just brainwash most people within seconds but he takes his sweet time cooking them slowly while risking getting exposed and his plans going to shit. Also one thing I always wanted to point out. Goblins and ogres are not usually the same bloodline. ogres and kijin might be but goblins are a seperate thing. Also he spent a few days to conquer the nightmare forest by brainwashing a single race. Why didnt he do so with all the other monsters as well for example the biggest forest where link came from? He could atleast take over all the monsters and turn some of them into breeders for unlimited soldiers, others could be raised as cattle for meat to feed his army. I guess the ogres under him are already doing so in the nightmare forest but it would be good to mention the system they have created to farm materials and food and things since you took your sweet time to mention and explain the cow farm. Normal smut only novels end before 200 chapters dude. Yours is at 900+ already and I suppose you are turning it into a good story as well along with the excessive smut so dont ignore everything that is not related to smut. And please focus a little bit on the mc's personality development. He is way too carefree about everything. Also its about time the blondie died, we need the villain gods involved in the story, the blondie has taken too many chapters. If you dont wanna kill him, then just get him brainwashed to work for the mc. Also last time the mc confronted the blondie he disappeared as if he was an illusion or too fast for the mc. If he was an illusion then the mc has dont nothing to unravel that mystery to catch the real him, hence proving why i call him extremely careless. If he is just that strong then that is another reason for the mc to not be so careless around him and act like an arrogant god, The mc at this point only trains when he is about to get his ass handed to him. Other times all he does is let out his excessive frustrations and inflict pain to women around him. He even waited for weeks after killing the eclipse whisperer before absorbing his powers. Why? I can only assume because he is lazy since no reason for given for him to not absorb those powers. Plus there are a lot of women he has forgotten about. Like the elf neighbour whose son was abusive, the mermaid queen who was his prize, I am not even talking about the ones he used and intentionally forgot about like his guide in the sea, the elf mother daughter duo, the drawf mother daughter duo, the ones he used and decided to cut off from. the general in the sea he appointed as the new queen. I am talking about the ones he wanted to enslave but never got the chance to use. Dont forget them in the story and bring them back man.

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
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    Alright overall it is a great series and everything seems perfect. The apocalypse world building is great and it has all the scenarios an apocalypse world should have. The character building is also top notch. The author writes very well and the story is going pretty smooth too. Although there are a few things I do not like much but that could just be personal preference or something based on the other novels I read. I was originally comparing it to 'My three wives are beautiful vampires' because it is quite similar in some aspects. Now here is the issue from the other reviews I have read. Author considers everything goes in a harem as a harem. Well most of us have a different definition, while there is no multiple males, the girls in harem still engage with each other in the absence of the mc and from the looks of it they seem to be more turned on by engaging with each other in the presence of the mc and just use him as a stallion. Well thats just my personal observation and quite a rare occurence so no big deal. Still the yuri is quite a turn off for me but I dont watch it for the smut anyway and author is free to write whatever he wants. Another issue that I see so far is that some of the background seems to be missing, now I know it can pop out later on but everything has been disclosed so openly and in detail so I dont understand why these things are missing. Firstly what happened to all the ather dragons, did they die or just went somewhere and why wasnt lilia with them. Secondly it says that the ather sent the draconic to another dimension but how did the other races end up in that dimension as well. And how is it that the draconic are in a seperate dimension and the other races in a seperate dimension with all the mana. Lastly did the draconic have contact with the other races or not? Because from the looks of it they did, so why are the other races still not enslaved by the draconic yet? Author seems to be leaving some opportunities for the mc to coax the other races into joining him but this needs further clarification. Maybe it will come in the later chapters but it should have been there when Lilia explained the real history. I mean the ather might not know the inner workings of other races but they should know where each race was sealed right because they were the ones who sealed them, also they never told us why they sealed them and sided with humans in the first place. Another issue which is also a part of this is that Noa and Nellie called the human race a 'supreme' race, what does that mean?

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
    Répondu à Sinful_Cyanide

    You are correct. Also people are asking him that question politely. I dont understand why the author keeps acting grumpy with those rude replies. He could just answer politely. Bruh respect your viewers or no amount of fame will get you far

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
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    Major spoiler alert ahead btw. Ok so I am at chapter 46/350 as of now and do not plan on reading this any further. For clarifying it, I was looking for something like top tier providence and turquoise pond, initially it was something like that but it got sus when the mc was advancing a major realm in every chapter and getting 3-4 new overpowered legendary skills. basically he gets a new cultivation technique based on the sword he is cleaning and where he signs in, since he is stationed at the legendary sword tomb where swords of all the past legends are, it is natural for him to be overpowered instantly. Anyway the mc never gets to meet his predecessor and now he is dead so the mc is pretending to be him. The emperor is actually an empress and pretending to be male, the emperor is surrounded by traitors internally and externally and only trusts the mc. the emperor's harem is made up daughters or relatives of those traitorous ministers and sect masters who want the emperor to have a crown prince to stabalize the empire. The emperor being a female cannot do so and sends the mc to his wives in disguise and use him as a stallion. if that isnt ridiculous enough, the mc follows the traitors time and time again to listen to their schemes and uncover their moves. At this point the mc is already at second highest major realm which is the half saint and his predecessor the sword god was 1 realm below him at the senior grandmaster realm. so he is basically invincible. Yet the mc has never killed anyone in a world of cultivation. The mc does not exterminate the traitors even after listening to all their schemes neither does he record it or anything in some kind of recording tool to give it to the emperor as evidence but keeps saying that the emperor will not believe him even if he told him about it. This is all quite lame to me, anyway that was no big deal because I thought he wanted to catch them in the act. so few chapters later all these sects, ministers all of them rebelled openly and yet the mc did not kill them and kept trying to talk them into surrendering. Even after they all mocked the mc and attacked him, all he did was defend and cripple the strongest guy while killing some unnamed minions. Now I dont understand if this mc is scared of blood or what that too in a world of cultivation. Its quite ridiculous tbh. The mc could have quietly cultivated at the sword tomb to reach the highest realm but somehow he ends up accepting the position of the imperial army commander for no reason when nobody even forced him to do so. The emperor having low cultivation is basically chicken on a cutting board and most of the ministers who already saw the mc being the strongest in the world during the rebellion are scared of him, the same goes for the emperor. But due to unknown and unreasonable logic the mc still wags his tail to the emperor because she is pretty after sleeping with all his concubines and the empress(by empress I mean the emperor's main wife, not the emperor himself). Now the mc definitely has a great calm and composed temperament but he seems to be unable to say no to beauty. Also i dont understand why he keeps interfering with worldly matters just because the useless emperor is stubborn about being the emperor. The mc keeps saying justice and righteousness like a hero often which creeps me out. Moreover he is too lenient towards the enemies and seems to be hesitating about killing them, he leaves almost everyone alive even if they rebel against the empire openly, sneak into his cultivation mountain or mock him for being a commoner. I also sensed some kinda racist and nationalism dogshit uprising because the mc doesnt needs to eat but in a recent chapter he ate a table full of meals and the reason being he couldnt resist the chinese delicacies. Also there is dragon this and dragon that about everything on and on. And all of this has happened in just 46 chapters, still 304 more chapters to go, I cannot imagine what will happen from this point forward but it seems to be turning into a slice of life romance chinese racist dogshit novel and seeing the 3.4 overall rating my suspicions seem to be real. So unless someone tells me I am wrong I am not reading any further.

  • Azriel_Origin
    Azriel_Origin6 months ago
    Répondu à Azriel_Origin

    Alright chapter 619 review update in comment since I am unable to leave a 3rd review. The errors are continously increasing. The mc is just straight up raping everyone by threatening their families instead of quietly wiping out their memories or whatever. Anyway he now under the sea and enslaved aegis, with 714 sirens left alive and few mermaids as well, he didnt instruct aegis not to kill anymore but whatever. So now he is near the mistfin kingdom and he tortured a couple for 3 hours for no reason which is fine. Then he kept mocking and showing off in front of the dude once again for fun, he barely wiped out his memories just before his death and said the memories are too much and he must wipe out useless ones. Ok I can understand if he intentionally discards the random useless memories but how can he be short of memory space being 2 evolutions above a counsellor. Anyway now he is at the gate checking area and he not only forgot to take his physical id card but also forgot what it looks like. I am pretty sure what a card looks like is not a useless memory and even if he wiped it out he still must have seen what it looks like to decide that it was useless. Author is really fking up with logic here. I mean I wouldnt complain if it was a short 50-200 chapter Smut novel but now you are on chapter 600 and it is a full fledged novel with world building and everything. You gotta level up your game man. The mc is getting increasingly overconfident and arrogant. Also kindly stop with the death threats for rape, it doesnt suit the mc no matter whether it is a villain mc or whatever.