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Avallanti

Avallanti

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A shitty author still practicing.

2023-11-17 JointGlobal
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  • Avallanti
    Avallantia month ago
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    I enjoy this novel. The characters' personalities have been perfect so far; every aspect of it is fun to read. A vast part of it is just the mc and Tony lol. Although the only flaw of this novel is the gender jokes. Author seems to place a large importance on making sure mc gets pissed about it or it's brought up almost every chapter. Gets pretty annoying.

  • Avallanti
    Avallanti2 months ago
    Répondu à Avallanti

    Basically, depending on how powerful he is, he can do whatever he wants. However, in the beginning it probably wont be too overpowered.

  • Avallanti
    Avallanti2 months ago
    Commenté

    You can try Chaotic Imagery. How this power works is basically chaos manipulation but based off of imagination with 3 neccisary follow up conditions. Any time he wants to use a chaotic manipulation to create a scenario he has to 1 have enough energy, power, or mental capacity. Two, he has to imagine 3 conditions happening that create this scenario. For example, negating someones attack he can do it in different ways for example them failing to aim correctly would cost far less energy than simply negating the attack altogether. Also he can manipulate reality in a chaotic way, for example creating 3 conditons for superman never being born if he has a conflict, however he'd have to have the energy required for all 3 conditions of reality manipulation.

  • Avallanti
    Avallanti2 months ago
    Répondu à Hades_1_Zeus

    The work is a little unpolished, I write some chapters in my free time. I’m going to be working on a polished work around next week, although it won’t be a fanfic.

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  • Avallanti
    Avallanti2 months ago
    Répondu à Hades_1_Zeus

    Alaric.

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  • Avallanti
    Avallanti2 months ago
    Répondu à Hades_1_Zeus

    It was said as tranquilizer to imply what type of attack they hit her with. You could take it as a concentration of vervain and wolfsbane.

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  • Avallanti
    Avallanti4 months ago
    Posté

    I love the story! Especially the concept so far for this novel. It’s not very covered yet so it doesn’t feel bland to read. I also really appreciate the fact that your scenes with characters haven’t fallen flat! It feels like I’m simply looking at a textbook with some others novels. Thank you!

  • Avallanti
    Avallanti5 months ago
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    So far, reading on from whenever the free chaps lock it seems fire. Ima give it the benefit of the doubt, nothing for me to criticize rlly. Hopefully webnovel brings back the fast pass feature or something so I can continue.

  • Avallanti
    Avallanti5 months ago
    Répondu à Fabio_Henrique_5198

    I recommend redoing this novel. There is a lot of potential for it, also, I think it could be very, very good, however, there were a lot of mistakes and it feels like around chapter 60 things just go to shit. Although I believe the concept it self can be some of the best on this site.