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About this book, its one of the good fanfics I've seen about lotm amd the writer knows what he /she is doing well the problem is how he interacts with our Klein morretti, even the encounter with adam is not really that convincing as we know that adam does not ask for permission to include you in his story🙄 What ticked me wrong is the effects of his seifrot inside the castle and even how he is able to be inside cause I think the reason klein could do it is in the name its called a castle right, and stop undermining klein too much the people reading the fic are lotm fans we mhhm sorry I don't think its fair trying to ruin another characters persona
I don't like how the mc has to feel guilty about everything going on even if he is a nice guy it can't be that much and the guy lives in the dregs all his life do you know how much it takes to watch one being slaughterd and the guy is coldly looking at ot normally now a kid he took advantage of gets sick and it becomes a big thing, 🤦 it sickens me😒
Somethings don't make sense in this novel. First this dude was supposed to be a genius but the point of his breakdown is from his brother's vr capsule? They were rich right and there was no mana to begin with the real assessment was at level 30,second is how a deskjob guy is having dinner with the protector of the earth's kids. Doesn't make sense I mean its like some hobbo having dinner with your first lady third his brother is owing angels a favour and his probem can be easily fixed wasn't his brother supposed to be kind, last thing the dude had grudge with the werewolves, how was he messing with demons to end up getting killed 😩🤦
Even when its not being used🤔
How is he matching the mc on skill or is the mc not having some 100× skill enhancement If you can't stick to what your idea is then its just stupid