General_Komrade

Thanks for your review! It's on hiatus- I'll still want to write, so more chapters will be released early next year.

As an author, I'd just like to just remind you to be careful when using AI with your story. I know it's very tempting, but the reason people read your work is for your own unique, human style. Your writing is obviously partially, if not entirely AI. Now, there's nothing wrong with using AI to help you generate ideas and outline your story, and even help structure your chapters, But please be very careful in using it to write your chapters. Just simply: don't do it. If you can, I recommend writing the whole chapter by yourself (I know it's not easy, it takes me 4 hours to write 1000 words) and then when you feel you can't improve it any more, put your complete chapter into AI and ask it for improvements. (Let AI check your work, not you checking AI's work) From experience, readers have a near unlimited amount of books to read; they want to read a human's hard work (they want you to bleed for them), not a book generated by AI. Anyways, there's a lot I can talk about in terms of plot and story, but I don't think that very suitable right now. (I've already rambled a ton) I don't want to discourage you, I think that writing's an awesome thing to do! That's why I gave 5 stars. In fact, if it wasn't written with AI, I would be ranting about how incredible the writing is. Purely put, the writing is *perfect*, much better than mine! It's at the quality of a top veteran writer, unbelievably perfect, and apart from the plot, has literally nothing to be improved upon. (And obviously, this level of writing is going to turn some heads) Anyways, feel free to delete my review if you don't want it on your book. Don't let me discourage you! (Actually, I'm expecting this review to be deleted, that's what I would do haha) The target audience of this review is you, nobody has to see it ^^ If you want help or further feedback on your writing feel free to send me your handle, I'd be happy to help.

I'm gonna take this as a quick chance to give an update: This current plan of posting a single chapter every time is actually pretty bad to the story as it locks me out of changing my mind and making changes. I want to try a different way and stock up on chapters first then I'll post them all. This'll probably take a while, and I hate that I won't be able to upload every week, but after 9 months of writing... I just can't keep up this rate anymore. I still have so much to write about and so much I want to say, but I'm getting a little tired of this work and want to try a few other ideas I've been having. I want to see this story being eventually completed, but I can't see that happening in the foreseeable near future. In the meantime I'll put my work on hiatus.

I'm gonna take this as a quick chance to give an update: This current plan of posting a single chapter every time is actually pretty bad to the story as it locks me out of changing my mind and making changes. I want to try a different way and stock up on chapters first then I'll post them all. This'll probably take a while, and I hate that I won't be able to upload every week, but after 9 months of writing... I just can't keep up this rate anymore. I still have so much to write about and so much I want to say, but I'm getting a little tired of this work and want to try a few other ideas I've been having. I want to see this story being eventually completed, but I can't see that happening in the foreseeable near future. In the meantime I'll put my work on hiatus.

It can also translate to the english word "Empire"

You know what? Maybe I don't wanna get my book banned here. Nice suggestion

Basically means you are filled with an inflated sense of confidence and security when you hold a gun

Regular bullets

Average cultivation MC