Écriture
de la lecture
3144
Lire des livres
You’re good though, I totally like the direction where the story is heading, hoping to see more soon
piece of advice, the overly dramatic and overly expressed paragraphs just for the sake of having more words doesn't signify better writing, it honestly kills the imagination of the reader, basically in normal terms it takes the fun out of reading this, keep it simple the story is good enough to be completely satisfactory if you just keep it simple and play to the mc characteristic, but making as some sort overthinking overexpressive character that does nothing but experience a plethora of emotion in half a second is just outright killing your own story
NAH BRO SHE DIDN'T JUST SAY THAT
oh my god i never laughed so hard hahaha
HOLY SHIT MY THEORY IS ACTUALLY RIGHT ????
i like him he's great
hol up, my theory is actually coming up true............cool
i really really doubt that, i doubt keith even has a father. wait a moment keith is a pure-blood divine race, and so is his mother through him, but his father was human, damn that actually proves my theory keith doesn't have a father, what i'm unsure about now is his mother whether she truly who we think she is.
are you sure ?
HOLY DAMN I WAS RIGHT SHE IS HECATE