king_frogv

The potential of your story is good, but there are a few areas where you can improve. Firstly, you should work on improving your writing style. Additionally, it's important to pay attention to grammar and make necessary corrections. One suggestion is to have others read your work and provide feedback so that you can better understand what you're writing. Overall, focusing on these areas will help enhance your writing.

please update i'm dying please update

why the hell did it take 10 chapters you know it's a pretty pretty pretty long 10 chapters that i have to skip half even realize and i see a big big big hole in your story and how are they going to manage to analyze kryptonian dna just how