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True, but I still think his limited manuverability would limit that His strong legs might let him kick hard, but can he move well enough to utilize that explosive speed
No pressure, I just want to make sure people are enjoying what I write. Besides, you do have a point. Most vague plans I have for the future have him being ‘there’ but not really contributing much. Just because he wants to fade into the background doesn’t mean he has to be so…inconsequential. If he’s going to be involved, he should be a bit more proactive. Thought still, I wouldn’t say he was useless. The episode as a whole, he did well in the middle and took out two of Animo’s creatures.
Scared because he was a normal guy now faced with giant monster animals. It’s his first time. I don’t know if I’d say useless, but I will admit he was sidelined in the last part of the episode. However, that’s kinda the point. This episode was his plan for Gwen to realize her powers and kick off the plot of the story (in this volume). He doesn’t plan to be the main one and build up the others. Still, I’ll take your critique and try to see about having him step up a bit more in future episodes…
One, cool image Second, no. More like a more human, Wildmut werewolf-type thing. Some of the hair is harder like spines and she can shoot them.
An interesting direction, but not oneArthur wants. His goals amount to kicking back and having fun with no responsibilities
This will now be my end game
Basically but small and baby faced
Not where I was going with that Not sure about daughters But he and Gwen are cousins, he will be going after mother and aunt, and… So yeah
One day
I think ur my new favorite person 😁
Close. Outfit was based on Serafall from DxD. Appearance is Danmachi Hestia with To Love-Ru Lala hair in twin tails, and big angel wings
I feel fiend and beast should be inverted
Typo of bundle?
I noticed a lot of grammer comments, so here’s one *two*