There's few factors when you have to consider before going premium. 1) how much progress you have gone in you're novel, (before you go into premium you have to let reader know what is you're novel is about and what direction it's heading) 2) as I considers, at least minimum you have to put 30 free chapters before going premium. ( at that point readers know what is you're novel is about and what direction it's heading) 3) don't go premium in a middle of a giant battle like situation (trust me I have experience in that) All in all at least put 25 or 30 free chapter out before going premium (minimum), at that point as reader alredy read you're novel for a certain amount of time he will normally be curious to know what's next. *by the way remove this comment after reading this ;)

Inspired by (only that one)

I apologise for the mistake I have done before, in the story mc only stay beta in the starting part and not remain.

With the progression of character development.

1) Yas. 2) Yas. 3) I cannot give a direct answere becus it includes spoilers but you might be able to figure out how there relation gonna be in upcoming chapters soon.

Hello, dear reader. If you have any questions feel free to ask them.

Also the ending is not rushed, it would be good if you think it's like the origin of leviathan( in the story)

Hello there, loyal reader. I noticed you have a question about the ending. Perhaps it's due to my inability to state the obvious or a lack of clear explanation regarding a specific ability the sin lord possesses. All the lords of sin have a passive ability that makes them sensitive to each other. This means they can feel one another. Previously, if you recall, Incarus used this ability to pinpoint Preta's location in their sanctuary when they divided their rooms. This also allowed them to sense whether others were alive or not. As far as I know (as I mentioned in the description, I am only an observer), after they were thrown out from the transcendent boundary, they felt the life force of Incarus disappear. Consequently, they assumed he was dead. Whether this is true or not, nobody knows because nobody was there.

Fafnir resemble larfleeze mostly, and his body similar to golem but his ribs are specially appear to out side.

Remember he(sin of envy) saying that Avlora is not just a game.

No!, if you want clear imagination about there body tipe, I could say incarus look like with the futures of the spiderman 2099 and with the body of the transformers last knight optimue prime.The body of there more refined and had the perfect build and the detail in above is mearly to give you a idea about how they look.

It's one of her strange habit