In Chapter 2, the story continues to impress me with its character development and portrayal. The introduction of characters like Emiko White and "Dad" is vivid and engaging, allowing readers to connect with them. The dialogue between Adam and the parents is engaging and provides insights into the family dynamics. This chapter promises a compelling narrative journey. Chapter 3 marks a turning point in the story, introducing the exciting concept that the protagonist is in the world of My Hero Academia. The desire to become a hero adds depth and intrigue to the narrative. The storytelling maintains a clear and engaging tone, allowing readers to immerse themselves in the protagonist's experiences. The character growth and the revelation of quirks are keeping the story captivating. Your storytelling journey continues to show promise, and I'm eager to see how it unfolds.

I'm thoroughly enjoying the story's opening. There's immense potential both within the fan fiction itself and in your skills as an author. I'm impressed by your extensive vocabulary as an non-native English speaker, which adds depth and flair to the narrative. Looking forward to witnessing your storytelling journey unfold.