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uh, yeah. hello guys, i'm your typical lazy-stinky-crazy writer.

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    I admit, this is a good concept. The translation is clean, a rare occurence. But one thing that i find very distasteful is the logic. Idk man, it's just too forced. Like there are many instances where i question the flow of logic from THE police officer. A job which requires sound logic in the first place. Like, the thought process which led them to that conclusion is too abrupt. As their thought only flow in linear way, without considering any other possibility. False charging someone twice and what? No consequence at all? Attorney general? Journalist? And what is this paraphrasing to Martial World and other similar toned wording? Talking about cheating in gambling game as if it's a grand concept. The exaggeration is too much. It's even a little bit confusing at first, like i'm really questioning if the world is truly modern world or wuxia/xianxia mixed with modern world.

Scripture of Heaven

There was once a peculiar book, unpopular among the mass and readers alike because of its unique way of story-telling. Even, call it a story book would be strange, it's more fit to be called a guidebook. And what the content of this guidebook, you ask? A Martial arts. From the boring brown, plain looking book cover with only the title. To the content of how-to, delivered with story-telling format, meticulously kind to the reader, this book really feel out of this world. More correctly, it's like a fruit of martial arts otaku who seems deluded themself as a martial god who comprehend the law or something. But as an martial art otaku, Ryong Bong love for this book has reach an obsession level. From the prequels, four Scripture of Sun, Moon, Star and Earth, to the final book, the Scripture of Heaven. Ryong faithfully read them everytime when there are updates. Alas, every thing will come to an end, and it seems this was the case for the Scripture series. Ryong was sad. After all, this book has accompany him throughout his miserable teenage life, until now. But, fate allows him to live a new life, in a new world. A world where martial arts are the norm. "That was 20 years ago, huh. Time sure fly fast." Ryong said, while unsheath his sword. In front of him, there were hundreds of men. Baring their sword. On their vanguard, stood an seemingly handsome young man. They all fiercely looking at Ryong, ready to advance. "Ryong, this is the last time i warn you. Give us your technique, and cripple your Qi core. I will let you live, even reward you with anything you want for the rest of your life." the young man voice were soft, but there is a hint of wickedness in that voice. Ryong snorted. From the beginning he never fear this man, nor the army behind him. Even if they all first-class force and martial artist, it's all nothing in front of his eyes. Ryong smirked, not answering the command that young man give. Understood that Ryong has never thought to give up, the two force soon collide.

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