Sudeepta_Majumdar

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Author, You said you’ll stick with it. But you are not updating any new chapters for more than 1.5 years. I am a new reader of your novels. And to be honest, I am starting to enjoy this novel. So I hope you’ll restart again with this novel..[img=recommend]

A Cthulhu?

Author said there going to be 9 ranks. Why it is only 8 then? And also wth is Intimidate in ranking?

Also why mabel is not much surprised after she found out about Adams system? Does she know about system before Adams? (well I guess not.) Author you didn’t explain that in this chapter. In my opinion you should also focus on these clues More. Thank You[img=recommend]

Why is Mc showing that he has a system/ cheat to someone he never ought to believe (at least author didn’t clarify their relationship clarity in much depth)?

In my opinion you should add more subtle expression when there is an arguement, here in the case of sect master and elder of the wolves.

Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]

Hey, why the author didn’t talk about the story after lin yuan left the body of that child. What happend after?😑

Does that mean there are upper ranks after level 9 legendary rank? As per the what the system said🤔