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Hello, I wanted to tell you something. I was one of your first readers who read this story when it had maybe around 4k views and 1 or 2 comment , and I’m happy with how far you’ve come. The novel is good, but I started to lose interest when the whole setting of the novel changed, and the MC started acting arrogant. To be frank, I didn’t like his character at all. Maybe it’s because of my bias, as I liked his first personality where he was kind-hearted, helpful, and gave those funny reactions when he had to explain things in front of class. It reminded me of my school days. Lastly, you surely kept your promise of killing the main character, which I asked you to do back in chapter 3 of the novel. I think I typed a big review, so I’ll end it here. Yet again, this was a great read for me, at least. The MC not simping for girls is a plus point for me. Also, I wanted to say that you really did that girl bad. I forgot her name, but I’m talking about the other reincarnator who was also killed but didn’t return. It’s the first time I felt bad for a character who wasn’t even shown for more than one or two chapters. The way she said to Noah that he could return, but she couldn’t, filled me with sadness 😔. I wanted to comment on that so badly, but sadly, I was on the Novel Bin website. Shoot, looks like I ended up typing even more. I don’t know if you’ll read this or not, but goodbye, and I hope you achieve even more success with this novel.
thanks for reading till now 😸😸😸
autocorrect 😂
Are you trying to say you want ninjas to have their chakra pathways? Then the answer is, all ninjas have it, even Itachi. The training he had was for him to use chakra to manipulate the life energy of DxD characters, as they do not have chakra network in there body. We all know that illusion works when chakra interferes with the chakra pathway. That's why, to make it logical, I made it so that illusion can be cast without a chakra network in the body.
Don't worry about it that's a small problem and will be solved easily.
there will be some counter balance.
no
Not it's Nature. He remembers something similar to it, as Izange is not that powerful compared to his reality manipulation.
well otsutsuki body is a cheat which costs 600m. system is telling him if he buys both indra and Asura chakra he will have 40% chance of getting it in 500 m. so he is saving 100m points, if he got lucky.
noted