ThatOneMystery

Writing’s very good, almost too good! 5 stars, great job! And I also think that the stability is very nice, as this man updates every 20 years! Only 20 years! 5 stars for that! But..the story development is lacking, where the emotion feels very forced and just way too weird, like how the characters don’t question how this random guy says he’s been given a second chance but not get crucified. 3 stars, do better. The character design, however, is very nice and accurate! 5 stars, continuing the streak! And the world background is also amazing. 5 stars! 4.6 overall.