SOLAMAN25
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SOLAMAN259mthCommentéThink if your the word of a system you should but them into brackets [ ] so we know it a system talking.h and your paragraphs you should cut them shot so the reader can find it ease to read upLove it if you make those change I will read this novelgood luck
Zhao Hai was stunned for a moment before he was delighted. He knew too little about this . Now was the time to get more information about it. He immediately ran to the spring and touched the spring water. As expected, the notification sounded again. "Space Spring Water, Level 1, can be drunk. It can improve the human body. It can be used to irrigate the land and accelerate the maturing period of crops by ten times. It can be brought outside the Space Farm and can be used to improve the land outside."- SOLAMAN259mthCommenté
just get the human women and ask them about itit's not that hard to solve.
By turning the fight into a melee fight, they could interrupt and stop the mage from casting his spell. - SOLAMAN2510mthCommenté
but Neji's hair is not made of sliver
Aiko made a thinking pose. "Then let me choose a beautiful name for him. How does Neji sound?" - SOLAMAN2510mthCommenté
why does almost everyone reincarnated or reborn have to be hit by a truck or any kind vehicle at that matter
And on his way back from work, he had a car accident. - SOLAMAN2510mthCommenté
his new name is Kahn he doesn't have any second name or is it going to be Kahn Johnson
Kahn finally spoke with an elated tone as he finally entered Vantrea, revealing his pleased smile. - SOLAMAN2510mthCommenté
why did you use Alex as the name of boy Alex is the name of a girl why did use it.
So he decided to put all the rest in his charm, as this was the stat that crossed the average barrier and was most useful for him in this world. After all, this is a woman's respected world. His face is his wealth and fortune. This also makes it easy for him to attack those heroines.