So far I find it a great novel, quite entertaining and interesting. The author usually publishes quite a lot, 2 caps per day and sometimes 5 or more. Although the reading is quite clear, there is still room for improvement, and the author has already said that he is trying to improve in that aspect.

Thank you very much for your feedback, I was thinking about that too, I think I will change it, when I have time. There are several things that do not convince me either, thanks for your suggestions and for reading.

I'm glad you like the chapter, if you have any criticism about the novel, you are free to say it. I'm here to improve.

Thanks for reading, I hope you like the next chapters too. =)