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I'm very bad at writing dialogue, which is why I didn't attempt it. I tried in Chapter 25. Can you tell me if it's okay?

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whanted to ask if you whanted to Exchange reviews my book Pixel Pioneers: Forging Dreams in Real Time and you on this book only onest reviews

whanted to ask if you whanted to Exchange reviews my book Pixel Pioneers: Forging Dreams in Real Time and you on this book only onest reviews

whanted to ask if you whanted to Exchange reviews my book Pixel Pioneers: Forging Dreams in Real Time and you on this book only onest reviews

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