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elizz_lv0

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2023-07-26 JointGlobal
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  • elizz_lv0
    elizz_lv03 days ago
    Répondu à Angry_Reviewer

    Oh, someone with decent judgment. As an author, let me tell you that you are absolutely right. I don't deny that there are strong and explicit elements . But well that's the kind of novel it is, and that's life; it has a little bit of everything. I like to have objective comments like yours, as they help me grow as a writer, although it is negative I will keep it in mind.Bye-bye(≧∇≦)ﾉ

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    elizz_lv02 months ago
    Répondu à Grangel

    I think I have fixed what you pointed out, thank you, every day I strive to improve this novel more, as a writer, well, as always I appreciate your comments.(´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)

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    elizz_lv02 months ago
    Répondu à Grangel

    sorry, I fixed it, thank you very much for pointing it out.(╹ڡ╹ )

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    elizz_lv03 months ago
    Répondu à Lore_God

    He can be whatever he wants to be, and my friend, that also includes this.

  • elizz_lv0
    elizz_lv04 months ago
    Répondu à Donutz

    I'm sorry English is not my native language and I'm not that good at it, but eventually I will hire an editor to fix it. ╯︿╰

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    elizz_lv05 months ago
    Répondu à AH_15

    I also considered that possibility, but I wanted a unique and rare name, so I stuck with that one

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    elizz_lv05 months ago
    Répondu à Troy34

    Yes, regarding that, here is my Facebook to talk on Messenger. https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=61560729814709

  • elizz_lv0
    elizz_lv05 months ago
    Répondu à Troy34

    Thank you very much for your comment, I'm glad you like my work. As for the participation thing, the truth is that I'm new in the world of writers, and anything you have in mind I would appreciate, since I'm just starting and any impulse is welcome.

The Noble Lady of Lust

Well, it seems that my previous synopsis wasn't very clear, but the story goes like this: the protagonist, a normal guy, dies, screws up in front of a goddess, as punishment she reincarnates him as a woman, and after a few years, thanks to a method she found, he can become a man again, but only temporarily. Well, that's all. Will the protagonist be able to satisfy his never-ending desire, the reason for his punishment? We'll find out. "As for genres, there's a little bit of everything: harem, romance, comedy, yandere, yuri, lolis, MILFs, elves, beastwomen, demonesses, dragonesses, giantesses, priestesses, androids, oyakodon, group action, netori, a bit of SM, and more. If it catches your interest, great!! plus here's the original synopsis for you.”>>> “Wait, you turned me into a woman just because I imagined that? I didn’t know you could read minds, that’s not fair!” (He had defiled her in his imagination in five different ways, each worse than the last). After his death, a goddess reincarnated him in another world. But his uncontrollable lust angered the deity, who decided to punish him by turning him into a woman. “Stop... don’t make that choice,” sounded an old voice But, through an encounter beyond the realm of possibility, he learns the truth about his situation: this world is not the fantasy he thought it to be. It can become brutal if neglected. He also discovers a method to transform back into a man. Now, determined to conquer this new life and a battle for power in which even the gods are involved, he seeks revenge against a fate that now only exists in his memories. begins to carve out her own path in this new reality, a second chance created by those who sacrificed far more than she could have ever imagined.

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The legacy of lust

"¿Por qué? Solo porque esto no era parte del trato." Adrián, un chico común que murió debido a un desafortunado accidente fuera de su control, fue reencarnado en otro mundo gracias a una Diosa. El problema fue su desbordante lujuria enfureció a la Diosa, llevándola a convertirlo en mujer. Pero aún sin rendirse y decidido a cumplir su sueño, ahora en un mundo diferente, Adrián proclama con determinación: "¿Sabes qué? No importa, ya verás, Diosa, haré un harem incluso si soy una mujer." Decidido a enfrentar lo que sea que traiga este nuevo mundo, reafirma su resolución. Sin embargo, justo antes de que pueda enfrentar lo que le deparaba el mundo , una voz lo detiene: "¡Detente! No hagas esa elección." El encuentro inesperado abre la posibilidad a volver a ser un hombre y cumplir verdaderamente sus sueños

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Dawn Architect-esp

"¿Por qué luchar, te preguntas? ¿Qué impulsa a las personas a avanzar, qué es lo suficientemente valioso como para que la voluntad de uno prevalezca? ¿Te has detenido alguna vez a reflexionar sobre el peso de tus decisiones, sobre el momento exacto en que las cosas empezaron a desmoronarse? Quizás nunca sepas dónde fue que erraste, o si alguna vez hubo un camino correcto. Pero aquí estás, el último vestigio de humanidad, moviéndote no por esperanza ni por redención, sino impulsado por la obstinada voluntad de desafiar a aquellos que destruyeron tu mundo. Así que lucharás, lucharás solo para contrariar a esos seres que arruinaron todo lo que amabas. ¿Es suficiente? ¿Es esa chispa de desafío un propósito digno para cargar hasta el final? En un mundo al borde de la destrucción, Lucien, el último superviviente de la humanidad, se enfrenta a su fin rodeado solo por las ruinas de lo que alguna vez fue una civilización próspera. Habiendo perdido todo y consumido por la desesperación, un giro del destino lo lleva de regreso al pasado inmediatamente después de su muerte. Armado con el misterioso sistema Gaia, Lucien se niega a repetir los errores del pasado y a asumir una vez más el manto de héroe. En su nuevo comienzo, decide operar desde las sombras, convirtiéndose en la variable inesperada que podría alterar la línea de tiempo y salvar a la humanidad de su trágico destino. Con poderes renovados y una determinación de acero, Lucien busca cambiar el futuro y buscar las respuesta que no pudo obtener en su vida anterior, enfrentando desafíos que prueban no solo su fuerza sino también su voluntad de permanecer oculto en un mundo que constantemente lo empuja hacia el heroísmo."

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Dawn Architect

“Why struggle, you ask? What drives people forward, what is valuable enough for one's will to prevail? Have you ever stopped to reflect on the weight of your decisions, on the exact moment when things began to fall apart? You may never know where you went wrong, or if there was ever a right path. But here you are, the last vestige of humanity, moving not for hope or redemption, but driven by the stubborn will to defy those who destroyed your world. So you will fight, you will fight just to antagonize those beings who ruined everything you loved. Is that spark of defiance enough? Is that spark of defiance a worthy purpose to carry to the end? In a world on the brink of destruction, Lucien, the last survivor of humanity, faces his end surrounded only by the ruins of what was once a thriving civilization. Having lost everything and consumed by despair, a twist of fate takes him back to the past immediately after his death. Armed with the mysterious Gaia system, Lucien refuses to repeat the mistakes of the past and once again assume the mantle of hero. In his new beginning, he decides to operate from the shadows, becoming the unexpected variable that could alter the timeline and save humanity from its tragic fate. With renewed powers and steely determination, Lucien seeks to change the future and search for the answers he couldn't get in his previous life, facing challenges that test not only his strength but also his will to remain hidden in a world that constantly pushes him toward heroism.”

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