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Jeez, the dialogue is atrocious.

So this Clark is a Psychopath.

As a long time fan of Smallville and self insert stories, I have to say this story is really uninteresting. There is very little to like of the character who takes over Clark and there’s nothing that really endeared me to him. When it comes to plot progression, it’s slow and barely anything deviates from the canon besides Clark’s way of handling certain plot events. Other than doing what most people do when reincarnated, I.e. steal other peoples work for money, Clark doesn’t do much else. When it comes to character interactions there’s not much to see. All in all, if you have nothing to do, reading this is an okay way to kill time but you won’t get much out of this story.

I’m confused, where was Nobara in all this?

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The updated chapter should have, Updated CH6*, at the start. If you see that, then you’re all set. The added addition is at the middle of the chapter.

Try refreshing the chapter or app.

I recommend refreshing the app or going back and forth in the chapter. That should update it.

I’m glad to see that you’re flushing out the characters relationships. Very nice.

lol, what?