Dr_Son
There is isn't really much that I can say without being asked directly. Far as anyone knows, I'm just a stranger with a particular set of skills that he's trying to master.
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Dr_Sona year agoRépondu à Bit_LuckyThank you. I know it's not everyone's cup of tea but I'm hoping they can enjoy it with an open mind.
- Dr_Son2 years agoRépondu à Ender_Peach
7 has been released in total with two auxillaries. I hope you enjoy.
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
Have to say, after two chapters in, I'm having a good time reading it thus far. Keep up the good work.
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
'fancy, lavish, and'
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
'said, bowed, and' 'said, bowed and moved' is also optional.
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
not sure if 'leave' is meant to be 'live'.
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
only a missing quotation mark at the end.
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
small mishap. 'greeted' should be replaced with 'gritted'
- Dr_Son2 years agoCommenté
Only near the beginning of this chapter, some of the dialogue was jumbled together. I may have known who was who, but at face value, it would be a little confusing to the unaware. An interesting story so far; so I'll look forward to how it turns out.
