RavenCorella
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RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_FurudeBit of blood geas intereference; plus she wouldn't have drained Yuki entirely... probably!
"You upended my life, broke ties to the person I hold dearest… yet… I can't bring myself to hate or to kill you.- RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_Furude
It's a mental geas, not a contract he can find loopholes around :)
As he stared blankly at the sun and thought over the information he had on vampires, he realized his master was a bit careless in letting him go. Furthermore, she ordered him to do something that completely went against his nature. - RavenCorella9mthCommentéCh 1 Prologue
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- RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_Furude
Soon :)
Stitching her abdomen wound closed, he reset her shoulder and put her broken arm in a makeshift cast. If he had magic, he could have done a better job, but now he could at most prioritize saving her life rather than hope for a perfect recovery. - RavenCorella9mthCommenté
others* 's is for implying possession. A person's <- suspicion. Good intro overall, though.
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Leo is the main character :) Just give him time to grow.
Despite trying to lighten it up, the gloom atmosphere settled and Leonardo finally acknowledged he would die. - RavenCorella9mthRépondu à ricebucket0_0
Hmm. You're right. I'll revise it.
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twice? First time by a few seconds, then by a full minute.
The wheel of time ground to a halt once more, its sheer pressure forcing Muchen to put everything on the line for a brief chance at guiding its vector. An opening was seized as soon as it appeared, and time was reversed by another minute. - RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_Furude
I can toss you a .pdf for the rest of vol1 if you wanna continue the binge. Just pop over on my discord :)
Struggling, he dragged himself to her side — yet her heart was no longer beating. - RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_Furude
Luck only takes you so far :) At some point you also have to use your wit and never get on a battlefield to begin with =D
After the Rock stage, there was also the Iron Skin and the Jade Skin respectively. Were he to one day reach the final stage, his body's outward hardness should exceed steel. Even if he didn't employ any magic, he should be able to easily withstand blades, arrows and other trivial injuries. The kinetic impact could still batter his organs into mush, however, so it's best he kept a look out for catapults. - RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_Furude
Some things are best done manually. I love a good shower :] Restores mental energy and all that jazz.
Stretching lazily, he arranged the jewelry in a neat matte black case and ran out to clean himself before Chimente's arrival. He'd been quite neglectful of himself over the week and it wouldn't hurt to be more presentable. - RavenCorella9mthRépondu à Kacper_Furude
Only on earth :) Most archmages retire away and explore other dimensions. Prolly why the planet even made it untouched.
Beyond this stage, one had sufficient knowledge to upturn entire continents or shift the poles. However, these spells were very demanding and drew too much attention to be feasible. Even if Karmic Spirits didn't act to turn the mage to dust, other supernaturals surely would detect and stop him. - RavenCorella10mthCommenté
sonic blast at Akuma's skull.
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cast
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this doesn't sound right
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Upping my review from 3 to 4 stars as the author has shown significant improvement since he's started. The novel's flow is much smoother now. For those who like action, it's an immersive story. Give it a shot! :)
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what's this then?
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