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ENDWALKER10dCommentémuah haaahaaa
"Nononono! My heart is not prepared for that yet! You go first!" The redheaded goddess sent Tsubaki ahead while blushing at the thought of seeing Nox again making her subordinate smile wryly until she rushed her to leave.- ENDWALKER10dPosté
Author I'm sure a decent number of ppl will come to read and it is up to you make the pace a little slow and give meaningful plot (whats with the sudden attack of other alpha?,why gloss it over as small matter)make characters have depth. you have time on your hands to improve as it's just starting out.May the creativity be with u.
- ENDWALKER20dCommenté
as little as possible
3 female partners (Already have them picked in mind) - ENDWALKER21dCommenté
this
2-> No secondary characters, just DxD(this comes to be highly explanatory, but I will comment, if you choose this route, it will be just Ban.-., without any force behind it, or without any organization, this can make some interactions with characters) - ENDWALKER29dRépondu à ENDWALKERCh 38 Chapter 38
- ENDWALKER29dCommentéCh 38 Chapter 38
- ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
Like this
I prepare myself for another argument when I suddenly feel a chill down my spine and feel a gauntleted hand grab my shoulder, I slowly turn my head around and all I see are two glowing red embers surrounded by blackness. - ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
he says to be loyal and is now Justin kissing cheeks of a girl who he knows if addicted to him through mate bond ,Author it's Tim me to get your head out of your behind. Don't spit out words of don't mean them
The table was quiet at his confession since they all knew it was true, they still remembered when he tore into those other vampires, hell he even made them bleed which he still hasn't told them how. Rosalie was working her jaw as her glare was set on him, he found it cute the way she was glaring at him. - ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
this right here is first strike, may abandon this is mc acts stupid once more
She nodded as they both got into the back, Ryan gave the address to his parents apartment in the city as the cab took off. - ENDWALKER1mthPosté
- ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
yeah, no world hopping it's for talentless authors who have no skill, try to stay in comic universe and if u can increase story with meaningful interaction.I am not alone in saying that the moment u make it world hopping u will lose a lot of readers.
Someone suggested Kevin take breaks for world hopping to places like Marvel to learn dimensional magic and absorb dimensional energies and even visit Bleach to show Ichigo that he too can be a man of many races if he wants to which Kevin currently is since he has chromastone, Technomorph, Kineceleran and spoilers Necro****** from the latest chapter. - ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
I'm done,u ruined it
I have also made the chat-group thing from the first chapter sound a lot more ambiguous, after reading some comments and thinking for a bit, the chat-group idea will either be heavily modified, or completely replaced. What I can guarantee is that there will be world-hopping 100% - ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
no harem is the way
As for the whole romance talk, the more I think about it within context a harem would make little sense, the mc has already had a large family and is over a century old mentally, also he grew up in a place where polygamy is considered weird at best and in Tamriel only orc warlords really have more than one spouse (that I know of). I still haven't decided anything but I am leaning towards the no harem route. - ENDWALKER1mthCommenté
pls ,don't be a harem ,its only good for lusty novels and fan fiction and pls don't hurt luna author,if you do that I'm dropping dead and leaving
And those who passed by the common room and saw the four girls talking quickly ran away in fright, not wanting to be close to them as they felt a frightening intensity coming from them. - ENDWALKER1mthCommentéCh 17 Update