Hunter_Valcarce

which Warhammer are you talking about you talking about the Warhammer 40k or Warhammer fantasy two different ones fantasy set in the medieval

killing everyone on the planet really happens the only reason they do so if it's too costly to take it back

when you die your soul fizzles out in the warp and does not have an afterlife this is not a fact I think the emperor doesn't take all the souls if a demon sees you eat your soul for a psykher it takes much longer to fizzle out so being a psykher is pretty bad if you believe in one the chaos gods you may be coming s***** far cursing down and all that stuff that one way you can live forever and coming to demon

pretty good

pretty good but I'm kind of pissed at the end you kind just like no one came when he came to see him down from heaven not Hestia or Bell anyone else like did they all just disappear what you didn't even have to Sweet moment with for Freya kind of you like 16 years later set they just said there names the end . i hope you make a spin-off like with MC makes his familiar be with Freya

pretty good I guess it makes more sense all for one then Hestia and the other things they're pretty good too

this is a little more better the old chapter wasn't bad it was just over all for one a little too cocky thinking you should walk in and not get hurt brute force it

I think you can still get that skill Bell head the op skill it be slightly warped crows faster like every time he gets a skill he grows a little more faster not a whole lot but

should let him take over his body he was on the road to the city or when is grandfather died give him time to start out.

new rewrite ain't bad The first one ain't bad either you can go in any way with the story.