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Reads like a Chinese novel. You ask people for money with this level of writing? You are delusional and a fucking idiot. Unlikable and paper thin characters, shit dialogue and worst of all. Dog shit prose. Reads like a shitty translated Chinese novel

If it took you that far to drop it then you must be stupid

Another dogshit Chinese translation. You can see the translator getting more and more regarded as time goes on. Haven’t read single chapter but I read the first paragraph and wanted to stomp a Chinese skull onto a curb. 0/10 find something better to do with your time than read this dogshit

Dogshit braindead Chinese copy and paste. It’s like you took the grammar and prose from a Chinese novel and decided to write with it. Why would anyone care about the small details like an iPhone choice or a steak someone cooked. Also he spawns in and describes himself as handsome and shit and how he already has 2 girls. Compensating for something loser? Self insert much author? Forced plot, harem, character has zero personality. You’re “dialogue” doesn’t go anywhere, you just added it in and it sounds like every one liner from the marvel movies. Feels and sounds like an ao generated piece of shit

Whatever you say retard

If it’s rage bait why did you respond? You saw it, saw my other comments. And you decided, to not have any self respect and get mad anyways. Why? Are you black? Doesn’t matter I can tell you don’t win much at life anyways. Disabled people like you with poor emotion control really are pitiful. Your family must be wondering what you’re doing in your room all day, only to find out they have a pathetic little loser getting mad online over a couple coons. They must be so disappointed you must not get much social stimulation the way you’re acting, a sad little boy cooped up in a small room. Baboons like should be covered kerosene and set on fire at the cross or whipped into labor till your bed ridden and then put out your misery getting pulled apart.

Obvious machine translation. Reads like a retarded middle school foreign exchange student wrote their first paper. This shit is irredeemably bad. There’s no excuse to being this bad

How pathetic. How are you going to punch down when you are literally garbage

Gross a filthy little pajeet wrote this garbage. Didn’t even read it yet but I know this guy couldn’t write for shit. Blow your brains out filthy Indian dog. Go shit in the streets or whatever you do filth.

Pisses me off how this Peter has out of context knowledge and yet he doesn’t prevent any of the super villains from forming in the first place. The lizard. The spot. Of course these two are the easiest ones too and have very non violent ways to prevent it. So lame, zero imagination and thought put into your writing