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2023-07-02 JointGlobal
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  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr30a month ago
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    He better kill him before he summons Rais, or he is cooked

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302 months ago
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    Its pretty mid because: - MC is unnecessarily paranoid. Like guy wears a cloak everywhere as according to him everyone is out to kill him. Wearing a cloak would get more attention. - I read to Ch 21, but there's no romantic action yet not even a hint from the MC. That said it's pretty decent if you don't mind the things above, and has good weak-strong element to it.

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302 months ago
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    Why tf is this rated high and have so many views? It has Chinese novel elements like scummy tactics from administration while being based in the US ...

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr302 months ago
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    Should have ended him right there and swooped through all his conquered territory.

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr303 months ago
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    Amazing compared to all the thrash here. Completely unique idea which keeps you hooked. My only teeny tiny complaint is the lack of romance to spice the MCs life a little bit, but that's a personal thing Read this I promise you won't regret it.

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr303 months ago
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    MC personality fkin ruins it. Acts pretty full of himself and the entire plot bends itself for him. Also just wastes time chasing booze, even a brain-dead harem anime is 100x better than this. If you want a rude, stubborn, full of shit MC this is for you.

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr303 months ago
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    Broke the poor guys bar for no reason

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr303 months ago
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    Couldn't he just run from one end of the room to another?

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr303 months ago
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    It was pretty good in the beginning especially the whole weak to strong trope, and the manually having to craft alchemy using actual science without full system support. Lot of other fics just do it with 'magic'. At the start the MC seemed pretty smart and level-headed. This unfortunately dropped at the part where he encounteres Sirzechs. The rational MC suddenly becomes an egomaniac and prone to outbursts without assessing the implications of going against a being who could vaporize him in an instant. And the only thing which saves him from this, is the plot armour of 'if they get rid of me, a war will break out since Azazel backed me'. But as we see in the anime, powerful beings don't always think rationally, so realistically Sirzechs would just force him into servitude as he cares more about saving Rias - consequences be damned, and the Grigori realistically aren't going to mobilize their faction just to avenge an affiliate who wasn't even a full member of the Grigori. Besides since the MC only reveals his affiliation after he makes a deal with Sirzechs, in a scenario of Sirzechs forcing him into servitude the moment he goes against him, the devil's could always counter the Grigori accusation by stating that they were unaware of their affiliation. My point is that the lack of consequences of his pride, kinda shits on the whole immersion as it's not realistic and the plot forcefully bends the world to the MCs advantage.

  • Xmpr30
    Xmpr304 months ago
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    What can't he negotiate helping Rias without becoming a devil? Can't they make a devil contract like giving him connections and political support in exchange of him fighting and winning in the Rating game? Its still kinda sucking up to Sirzechs but the above should buy him time to catch up in power levels.

The Game I Play

I stand in a black void unable to feel anything. "Do you want to play a game?", a blue luminescent box asks. I grin. Of course, why would I let go of this opportunity to get out of this mundane life. Multiverses? Unlimited power? A cure to my depression? I'm in. Author Notes I got bored of reading most Gamer fics out there, so I am going to have a shot at my own. Most of the gamer elements of this story will be half derived from other fics (inspired from DarkWolfShiro, Crowbourne) along with a mix of my own ideas. A couple of other things I want to add: - This will be a jumpchain with the MC hopping across mainly anime worlds but also some TV worlds too. Do note that the MC will be spending a significant time in some of these worlds, so certain worlds might last for alot of chapters. - Unlike the other jumpchains the MCs harem will tag alongside him to the other worlds. - The first few chapters will be a bit technical introducing various aspects of the system, along with some grinding to become OP. However before you click away, this is to setup the MCs personality for the more 'emotional' part of the story later on. - The MC won't be a hobo-grinder and is just a tired 20 year old who wants to live life without any restraints like money, job, school etc. - We will be starting out in HOTD but there will be no romance, mainly just powering up. The HOTD arc will probably not be too long. - Feel free to suggest any harem members(No HOTD characters) in the reviews. I will create a poll for the most popular options. - I am not the best in art, so I would appreciate fan drawings. Well that's the end of that information dump. Enjoy my shameless power fantasy ! Stat and Skill Sheet: https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/e/2PACX-1vT-vykKcltBMthVrYAYnpbvDpODc7nN9UQZxWv-_pjx_duaqcv6Jz8HsXtb5L0klKVuZ-_8fBg20IiZ/pub?pli=1

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