decent first chapter

I will expect something Monday i actually rerote a few things

reallyy? well I'm actually returning to it but ima delete the chapters and repost. dw ima coing back in meantime join my discord

she threw it in the bin

we dont need to care about that world anymore

out of stamina already

assuming you mean who left her the yellow scarf that's left up to the reader.

Pretty good novel I really liked it. Mabye not the starting since it kinda throughs you off but the fight scene and the build up the writer created really impressed me. I hope he keeps writing and eventually gets a contract.

bro she was his husband and didnt know that?? idk why but the author seemed to feel sorry for this lady if i was the writer she would have died in this chapter and if i felt like it her children would go down with her.

tf is this????

I liked the introduction, but it could use some work. For instance, the exposition could be toned down a bit in addition to the description and then there's the description of the characters that could be tonned down also other than that its a great novel.

yea😂

thanks

So the opening was a bit slow but the overall atmosphere that the writer creating is interesting and he determined the plot right in chapter 2 which was good. And i love how the sub plot isn't rushed but instead takes its time ti built up i hope the story keep bring in new interesting things!

lame

us men are so simple one freaking smile caused all of this

was walking home

walked

not a bad start i liked the ending somewhat hopefully we get more on jin and reum

this was a well written and well planned novel. the pacing was good the scene were explained and designed excellently. I personally think that Ethan's character is a bit generic which i aint to find of but it's find hopefully this show follows the kill off a character dynamic and does depend on dead wait to hold it back.