nitrolid

Your writing captivated me from the very beginning. Your meticulous attention to grammar not only enhances the clarity of your writing but also reflects the respect you have for your fic. Your vivid scene descriptions make it easier to imagine what's happening, allowing me to immerse myself fully in the story. Moreover, the concept of the story is both compelling and thought-provoking, and I find myself wanting more. I have read your previous work and I hope you continue writing.

The implementation of its characters, world and its environment, very well described and detailed that feels alive, conveying the feeling very well. Good management of different perspectives in his writing and intrigue, something very unique in his stories. A very promising plot, with very realistic, beloved and memorable characters, a book that I recommend and that you must read.

zestantha when she heard jack say those words:

mi amigo el que se leyó todo:

It's his first story, that's why he asked for comments, inviting others to share their opinions on the matter. Since there haven't been any suggestions yet, who knows what will happen.

It is a very good book with excellent management of characters, narrative, and history. Additionally, the well-placed references enhance the overall experience, keeping the readers intrigued. I highly recommend this book.