DaoistTempest619

Pls update 😭😭😭😭, I can't read any smut again because of this novel

I'll prefer to update for now. I already have the structure for the story planned out, it's just my laziness preventing me to update daily [img=Smug][img=Smug]

The Mc is too crappy that even i who has some resistance to this type of things couldn't stomach it. Shitty simp of an Mc

Enjoyed it, but I didn't like the way the pregnant Euphemia behaved

In my opinion,the MC's pure trash...iff you read the first 4 chapters then you'll understand what I'm saying. And the worst of all is the overly ambitious author saying the story will get better at chapter 80+ Man it's too long, you would have made it at least 20+, you think everyone has patience bro 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨 I don't know about you guys but I had read it on another website and couldn't resist coming here to revyiew

Seriously it was a good story, but the Mc was too trashy for his own good good. I'm very disappointed author 😮‍💨😮‍💨, take this as a lesson and improve

Give the guy some slack guys🤭🤭🤭...i think it's enough now, let encourage him to learn from his mistakes

Too much time wasted. But I enjoyed the part of Ink Death

I'm my opinion, the world and story background is very awesome. But the Mc is a disgusting hypocrite... I'm simply saying what I've observed, his attitude is too contradicting. Sometimes he says he just wants to Cultivate and attain immortality but he is the first to jump in to matters of the world and the author uses a fvcking excuse such as "helping the common people " It's too stupid.Especially when he said he was indebted to than Wan guy because he gave him a martial skill book. The fvcking book was borrowed by Gu ji so why should he be indebted to Wan boan. So he's trying to say if i borrow a friend1 a sword and the friend1 gives another friend2 and that friend2 gives the sword to another friend3 before the friend3 gives it to Mc.So the Mc will feel indebted to all of them eh... Destroy that so-called morals and principles of the Mc and he'll make a good character. You can't expect someone who still concerns himself with worldly affairs to become so-called Immortal...can you??? At least make him a mini fang Yuan, he doesn't need to be scheming,evil, he should just mind his own business and cultivate. The worst was when in a simulation it was mentioned Gu Ji died and the Mc felt huge grief...( how can you feel useless emotions if you want to walk the path of immortality ). I'm simply giving an advice, it doesn't matter if you follow it, but the direction your taking this novel is just like the other useless novels with a fairytale ending. I even have the thought of dropping the book when I see this crap scenes ... no offense, I just hate those type of scenes, just like in Chaotic Sword God, I dropped it due to thesame reasons, it's even more extreme there, imagine Mc sacrificing his life tsk tsk tsk!! Yours truly Daoist Tempest

Sigh soryry, understood. It will be explained I'm the future chapters