De_law17
Trying again, I've got this! I hope.
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De_law17a day agoRépondu à Sunny_ShumailThank you so much 💓
- De_law172 days agoRépondu à Sunny_Shumail
you know it was I [img=Loving it]
- De_law172 days agoCommenté
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
- De_law172 days agoCommenté
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
- De_law178 days agoRépondu à KingCommenter18
Now it's how long it lasts that matters. Thanks for all the comments.
- De_law1714 days agoRépondu à Blazzing18
Thank you so much man .
- De_law1714 days agoRépondu à Blazzing18
Firstly, thank you so much for the honest review. This is my first attempt and i appreciate the advice and feedback to make it better. Now as for why he has to go back to earth. that was an afterthought tbh. Wanted to do something different. But, what I can do now is to reduce how frequently he returns to earth seeing that it is not very necessary.
- De_law172 months agoRépondu à Eric_Kestner
Most door can be locked from either sides, just need to have the keys. I could have added to the scene that she had taken the keys from the inside idk what do you think?
