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SpacesSnips

SpacesSnips

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Like to read and write… that’s about all.

2023-06-02 JointUnited States
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  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips2 months ago
    Répondu à MustafaMahmood

    Yeah, I kind of imagined it as the elf’s disdain for the other races that manifested in him calling her both beautiful with his “you of all people” and insulting her by calling her profession barbaric. I’ve always thought of the elves as, except for the rare few, an arrogant race that thinks they are the best cause their so close to nature or whatnot, so I tried to capture that with double layered insults along with also giving him a bit of humanization with an attraction to beauty. Though I can see how it can cause confusion.

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips5 months ago
    Posté

    Well, I guess it’s about time I put a review over here. Five stars as is obligatory. I don’t have much to say but I’m free to ask questions to just comment below and I’ll answer to the best of my ability. Though… other than that I guess I hope you enjoy your read. See y’all later

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips9 months ago
    Répondu à DesolateRipper

    Sorry to hear that, it was meant to be written in that vague and unsettling way, as it wasn't really meant to be quite as happy. But I didn't intend for it to be hard to read. It was kind of just my natural voice in my head being written. So I'm sorry that brought confusion.

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips9 months ago
    Répondu à DesolateRipper

    I can see where the confusion comes from as it really isn't explained at all but the subtext is basically a power imbalance. The Lauragne's hold more power than Gabriel's family. This means that say, like a year before this happens, one of the Lauragne's, it could be any noble family too, came and saw how Gabriel could heal all of these wounds with a touch. So they report back and find more information which then leads to the much more powerful family pressuring Gabriel's family into sending him off to be married to their family because they want that asset for their own. That would be the carrot. As for why they just didn't refuse, or why word wouldn't have spread. To address why word didn't spread is becuase cities, especially in an era like this, are very isolated with people rarely, if ever having contact with any other city. This means that word wouldn't spread. As for the former, it would be because Gabriel's family couldn't refuse, they would be destroyed by the superior political power of the Lauragnes and as such it would be more beneficial to send him there rather than to defy and risk destruction. It wasn't too hard of a choice either because they already have an heir in Gabriel's sister. I hope that makes sense. And I do admit that I should have explained that but its a bit too late.

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips9 months ago
    Répondu à J2407

    Just a Christmas thing I wrote, doesn’t really have much meaning other than being Christmas themed and cute

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips10 months ago
    Répondu à Supreme_IQ

    Imma mass release tommorow, maybe four or five chapters. I’ve been sick for the past two days so I wasn’t able to write much. But now that I’m better there will be at the very least two chapters a day.

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips10 months ago
    Répondu à Supreme_IQ

    No, it’s more like the poor girl only saw that her father wasn’t responding and thought that he was dead, only he was just very sick and on the verge of death. It’s from her point of view so I just tried to capture what someone would think when they see corpses around and then come back to their house only to see their dad lying on the floor. Of course she would assume the worst.

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips10 months ago
    Répondu à Sea_Light

    No? This is just my natural writing, like I do go back and proofread it and all that jazz but I don’t use AI to write. Plus this is a fanfiction so I just write what makes me happy with the work rather than try and make it perfect, and I’m happy with it being flowery that’s my preferred writing style

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips10 months ago
    Répondu à Supreme_IQ

    No problem, I’m going through my backlog of stories and putting out a decent amount of chapters for them. Hope you enjoy the ride for this one.

  • SpacesSnips
    SpacesSnips10 months ago
    Répondu à byjeed

    Yeah, just transferred and rewrote it over on this account

A Trap in a Lewd Dungeon

Have you ever wondered what would become of you once you died. When the last vestiges of your existence is wiped from the universe. Well if you have then you've thought more than I did. As I was what one would see and say that he only lived in the moment, chasing the most recent highs and wasting a life away in silence. Yet when it all ended I found myself in a black void, a voice telling me of wondrous things. Of people turned heroes by a mysterious system, of a place where all could happen. I was excited, to be able to become one of those but my luck it would seem had not turned as I was not to be one of those heroes but the opposite really. A villain, one whose only purpose was to be the stepping stones of a burgeoning hero. NO... NO I say to that fate I would not be just another common mob, waiting for my inevitable death. I had dreams beyond that, beyond anything that this damned system had made for me. I had died alone, with no one to mourn me, but most importantly I had died without ever knowing the touch of a woman. And it may have been for that very reason that I had overcome my limits, taking the power the system gave to me and jailbreaking it. Taking it upon me to be the lewdest dungeon. Instead of being the whetstone for a hero I would be the bad end. The final villain that none could overcome. Yes, that was to be my purpose. But why... why was I given such a body. I had become so cute, a body that would topple countries with its cuteness, I didn't want to be that, I wanted to be the muscular demon lord at the end of the road. SO WHY!

SpacesSnips · Fantaisie
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A Walk Among Stars

Would you give your sight... the very essence of that sense of yours...? So that never again would you be able to see again. For the simple ability to heal. Take upon the injuries of those you care for. As with a single touch. They shall be healed. Whether it be a broken limb... a bruise... or even a whole arm... nothing, not a single thing within your grasp will ever be broken. Yet when I opened my eyes... it was not the kaleidoscope of colors I knew the world as... nor the exuberant face of my sister. No, it was to this empty void. Filled only by my sense of touch. "Of course" There was no other answer that would satisfy my will. For this was my choice... and my choice alone. ... When the world was created... populated by species upon species of beings. Yet a drop here... a star that may have yet to burst. A small flap of some God's coat. For the world was given life. Life greater than others. For they could use magic. An ability so wondrous that many nations had been created and felled in the harrowed halls of libraries. Yet this ability was not equal, and neither was the strength of will. For it appeared within women, every man that was born... for every one of them, there was an equal thousand women. As for magic. A rare occurrence already, made even more rare by the gap. A change in dynamic. For there was not some great king... there was not one holy emperor. Or even a god. There was a queen... a holy empress.... a Goddess. For man's place was not on the battlefield but upon the soft ballrooms, kitchens laden with instruments of creation rather than destruction. Married into well families that cared for them like precious possessions.

SpacesSnips · Fantaisie
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