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Yeah, I kind of imagined it as the elf’s disdain for the other races that manifested in him calling her both beautiful with his “you of all people” and insulting her by calling her profession barbaric. I’ve always thought of the elves as, except for the rare few, an arrogant race that thinks they are the best cause their so close to nature or whatnot, so I tried to capture that with double layered insults along with also giving him a bit of humanization with an attraction to beauty. Though I can see how it can cause confusion.
Well, I guess it’s about time I put a review over here. Five stars as is obligatory. I don’t have much to say but I’m free to ask questions to just comment below and I’ll answer to the best of my ability. Though… other than that I guess I hope you enjoy your read. See y’all later
Sorry to hear that, it was meant to be written in that vague and unsettling way, as it wasn't really meant to be quite as happy. But I didn't intend for it to be hard to read. It was kind of just my natural voice in my head being written. So I'm sorry that brought confusion.
I can see where the confusion comes from as it really isn't explained at all but the subtext is basically a power imbalance. The Lauragne's hold more power than Gabriel's family. This means that say, like a year before this happens, one of the Lauragne's, it could be any noble family too, came and saw how Gabriel could heal all of these wounds with a touch. So they report back and find more information which then leads to the much more powerful family pressuring Gabriel's family into sending him off to be married to their family because they want that asset for their own. That would be the carrot. As for why they just didn't refuse, or why word wouldn't have spread. To address why word didn't spread is becuase cities, especially in an era like this, are very isolated with people rarely, if ever having contact with any other city. This means that word wouldn't spread. As for the former, it would be because Gabriel's family couldn't refuse, they would be destroyed by the superior political power of the Lauragnes and as such it would be more beneficial to send him there rather than to defy and risk destruction. It wasn't too hard of a choice either because they already have an heir in Gabriel's sister. I hope that makes sense. And I do admit that I should have explained that but its a bit too late.
Just a Christmas thing I wrote, doesn’t really have much meaning other than being Christmas themed and cute
Imma mass release tommorow, maybe four or five chapters. I’ve been sick for the past two days so I wasn’t able to write much. But now that I’m better there will be at the very least two chapters a day.
No, it’s more like the poor girl only saw that her father wasn’t responding and thought that he was dead, only he was just very sick and on the verge of death. It’s from her point of view so I just tried to capture what someone would think when they see corpses around and then come back to their house only to see their dad lying on the floor. Of course she would assume the worst.
No? This is just my natural writing, like I do go back and proofread it and all that jazz but I don’t use AI to write. Plus this is a fanfiction so I just write what makes me happy with the work rather than try and make it perfect, and I’m happy with it being flowery that’s my preferred writing style
No problem, I’m going through my backlog of stories and putting out a decent amount of chapters for them. Hope you enjoy the ride for this one.
Yeah, just transferred and rewrote it over on this account